Lamorinda Rugby Football ClubLogo Design Contest

Dear Ch,

my initial entry feel free for comment and direction

thanks

#3 - Getting better! Can you strengthen the arm and maybe include a rugby ball? Not sure if that works...

thank for comment will work for it.

new design entry as comment #13 #13 #14

thanks

Liking number 14. Would like to see darker green and a bit cleaner/more stylized rat - less cartoonish. Fewer lines, maybe no shading. Nice work!

will work very soon.

Sorry for my delay submission

I'm liking 39 the best so far, but there's something about the rat that's not quite right. Maybe too literal or "rat-like." I'll have to think about it, but I kind of like the more "stylized" rat in #44, though it could also be interpreted as a wolf or something. Maybe more of a 2-D look or maybe sort of a human-like arm. This is probably not very helpful. I'll think about it some more.

thank for comment and direction so far
I will work again for what you think,
please wait my submission

makou

Dear CH,

new entry let me know what do you think,

thanks #52 #51

thanks

I definitely like 52 and 51 the best. I showed them to an embroiderer who thinks it may be tough to embroider the detail. Not sure that can be fixed and still have this look?

will try make more simple line and detail plese wait ..

I update the design with simple lines and bold, and I think this will work for a thick embroidery #55