Hi Loquaz, this is just great! I really love it. It is so clear and has so much joy in it. Do you think you could get the bird a little bit wilder? Thank you and have a wonderfull day Nicole
Thank you so much for your kind feedback -- it's most appreciated! Submitting two alternate versions with hopefully "wilder" birds. I'm trying to find a balance between the elements that define, for example, a hawk and a simple shape that will read and reproduce well. Please let me know if either of these new birds works better for you. (Or if you have suggestions for a type of bird you have in mind.)
Hi Nicole: I read the description of the logo you've had in your mind and had a go at it. I've switched the shades of gray, as dark red against dark gray is very hard on the eyes (the combination creates a vibration of sorts that is a a bit uncomfortable). Let me know if I've come close to your vision -- and if there is anything I can do to improve upon my version.
Hi Loquaz, I like the Way you did # 37 and # 36 and it is really close to my vision. It was a good idea to change the greys, it is very good that way. And I like your lamb. Do you think it is possible to put the bird before the wild? I like it very much the way it is now, but it is vogelwild and not wildvogel ( ok, giving the shop another name is a possibility;-) I like #34 too. Is it the same Bird as in 36/37? Maybe it is possible that the lamb is looking down to the bird and the bird is looking up to the lamb in #36 and #37? Thank you very much and have a wonderfull day Nicole
Hi Loquaz, thank you very much for your revision. #68 is quite the way i thought of it. But it really looks a little bit better in #36. It is more energized. But then I have to rename my shop... And I like still #34. It would look so nice on a baby body Thank you very much and have a wonderfull day Nicole
Hi Nicole: Many thanks for your continued feedback! I'm submitting two additional versions of your vision. In one, I returned to the original bird. I realize it's not looking up at the lamb, but thought perhaps it's fluffy of wildness might bring back some of the dynamic feel for you. I'm also presenting the version with the second bird that has some "movement" on one of the wings -- again, to bring a bit of dynamic feel.