La Reziere Shooting ClubLogo Design Contest

Hi,sorry I was out for a few days but I am asking for 3 extra contest days so please make appropriate changes as follow:

1) I really like your logo actually it is probably close to being my best and first choice choice
2) I love the design of the boar, it looks fierce
3) Should be black and white, might need a bit of 3D here since it will be a PINS.
4) I like the police you used but bear in mind it will be empty where all your brown is but for the lighter brown
5) Some designers have out cereal on the side i like it it brings elegance to the design

please make the appropriate changes and thereis a good chance you will win!

Best

VT

Hi, another comment, dont forget the logo should be cast in metal so some shading /3D might be important

#24 added 3d shading and chrome effects - same with #25 but Black / white.
Thanks,
Kib

Super, let's try # 25 La Reziere in Black, round black but interior white since it will be a PIN. Please note it will be cast in metal so the white will actually be empty whilst all the rest will be in metal. So somehow we need to tie the wording to the edges. Maybe try to add as well wheat or bouquet of cereals as another designer did which i like a lot (if possible)

#26 good but would be nice to have it more subtle / elegant for cereals thanks

#27 again needs to be more subtle for cereals and please note, only black and white with comments on pin / metal above thanks

Hi, #30 and #31 arevery good to link the wording thank you very much but somehow I liked it better oval than round, can you keep this link and nevertheless have it oval? Many thanks

Hi for #29 same comments as above with a little wish, I love the cereal but would like it to be cast ON the edges, would you be able to make them smaller,with shading / 3D and ON the oval perimeter, it will be easier to cast on the metal directly as another piece rather than asit is now. thankyou

Hi, for #29 again, since it will be a PIN, please dont forget wording needs to be connected to sides to make it hold Maybe see other options for police? I do like nevertheless the police, italic etc

#31 & # 32 - Connected name to oval to make it one solid piece. Placed cereal on edges of the oval in #32.
Thanks,
Kib

Thats good but dont you feel that whilst the white will be empty and the rest in metal La and Reziere should somehow be connected to make it hold together? Thanks

Was thinking the white would leave open space for what ever colors to show through the pin. I'll add color to represent this. Working on this now.

no please no color for that, black and white best. but i am just thinking la reziere might not hold together without connection between the two words? what do you think?

No worries, as long as your letters are connected it will be solid. On #35 I extended the top of the "R" to connect to the oval frame to add extra support.
Thanks,
Kib