I really like the style of the fonts, and the use of the play button here, although it was previously used in #1, so I guess he/she has priority on using it...
we prefer #9 on #10 as the grey text won't show up very clearly on dark coloured clothing.
Could you try to use the same font, but come up with something else rather than the play button? Could you try to draw a rising sun, on top of the word, a bit on the right hand side so that light rays spread towards the left? The sun could be in red/orange and the word in white.
yes will do now. I wonder if you could try a variation with the text larger or bolder, as currently the sun icon is dominant, and perhaps the text and icon should play a more equal role in the design?
also, for #9 could you try some variation of the play button? maybe drawing the actual button frame, including the arrow head and the reversed k?
sure, for #9 I was thinking to represent a square button, like the one you would find on a CD player, which frames the play arrow together with the reversed K... is it clearer what I mean?
for #44, my problem is that the design is quite narrow, compared to the heigth, so when printed in the centre of a tshirt it would not fill the width of the fabric unless printed very big...
could you try ot move the sun to the right or to the left of the word, to make the design overall wider and shorter?
I think #73 is getting there... one last thing: would it be possible to see the sunshine icon element (solar disc and light rays) alongside the text? It might mean the icon element needs to be narrowed a little to stop the overall design becoming too wide.
And also could we see a version without the encapsulating white border?
I really like #87! Could you try to put the sun on the right hand side of the word? And also, could we see versions with the reversed K one with the sun on the left hand side, and one on the right and side?