#8 Good use of negative/positive space. Would look good printed in many different colors. The text feels a bit too cartoony.
#10-13 The characters (monster especially) feel too "sesame street". Our primary audience is high school/college age males, cute is fine but it still needs to feel mature. Also not liking the red/pink color scheme much.
I do like that you have offered both multi-color and single color versions of each design
#20 #21 #22 #24 The distressing on the "monster" text makes it hard to read. I liked the original text better.
#8 #25 I like this design, but I'm not committed to it. I'm having difficulty thinking of changes I would make to it but it's not perfect. At this stage of the tournament I would prefer to see additional unique logos so I have more options to choose from.
I give my best to your contest, will be very helpful to know what do you like of my proposals, if you want to mix some of them, what you think could work better. Feel free to ask me any change you want to see, I´ll be happy to work on it.
#70 - #74 I really like the way you drew Kitty. I would like to see how #8 looks with the cat in a similar style/pose.
Between #71 and #73 I liked the slanted eye of #73 better. Creates more of a connection between the characters.
#51 I like the idea of Kitty chasing Monster but you can abandon this "imp/gremlin" style of Monster (also in #70 - #73, #36). I prefer him to have a happier expression and be larger in proportion to Kitty.
I apologize if I am not giving you much specific feedback. I'm finding little I don't like about the newest revisions. The shading in #99 #100 was a big improvement to the colored versions. I like that the heart is now white. I'm very happy with the current style of Kitty. Perhaps try out a few different options for Monster's eyes/mouth?
We may not always include the text when using the logo. Can you move the text to the side of the graphics so that I can see the full shape? Thanks!
You may notice that I have put some of your designs in the Non-Interesting section. This is to help me organize and focus on my favorite versions of each logo. Please do not delete submissions marked as Non-Interesting, I would still like to see them.
Thanks for experimenting with the face. I think for now I still like #119 #120 #121 the best.
#141 #142 is the best set so far. The simplified text is an improvement. The Kitty text does not feel like the right font. I don't like the mix of upper and lower case letters much. Perhaps a more rounded font like you had used in #120 but with the simple styling.
I never explain #8 concept, but it means the kitty curling in the Big Monster fuzzy hair, the heart is an expression of the kitty (Love) and the same heart work as the monster real heart (is placed where the heart should be in the monster chest).
#142 I still prefer the shading/color of this submission and the font used for "loves", "monster", and ".com". I would like to see the text of "kitty" done in the same font but all lower case letters.
Also, please recolor that design with the purple colors of #120 - kitty stays orange. I would also like to see the same with orange kitty plus monster with green colors like you used in #154 (still with shading pattern of #142 ).