Key West Permanent CosmeticsLogo Design Contest

If you would like to see any variations of any of my entries (fonts, colors, additions, subtractions, suggestions), please ask. Would be happy to do. Feedback welcome (likes and dislikes--stated constructively, of course :-)

Thanks,
Carla

Hi Carla,
#19: Thanks for your designs. Could you work this one with "Permanent Cosmetics" larger? We'd like to see it with "Permanent Cosmetics" on top and "Key West" smaller on the bottom too if you are up for it.

Did I do what you wanted re: sizes/placement? Don't be afraid to be very specific or let me know if I didn't quite catch what you wanted to see.

Thanks.
C

Yes. Thank you. We just updated the rankings. Could you tweak "Key West" on entry 54? A slightly smaller or narrower font. Maybe try extra space between letters too. "K E Y W E S T"

Thanks Carla.

did you want no extra spacing between the y and w--wasn't sure.

Also, just a note, if you want me to be able to reply directly to you, so if I have a question, or we "discuss" options, it's good to send a private message. It's something you have to initiate before the final phase, so that you don't have a bunch of designers saying look at me. But, if you are working with someone, it sometimes works better, because when i reply to that or send you a private message, you are then notified, whereas, if i just post something in the comment section of my entries, the only way you know is if you are looking there. It's just an option I wish they would make more clear to contest holders.

thanks for your feedback. Again, if i have missed the mark in interpreting please let me know.

C

ps--i guessed you were in key west, I had hoped to convey a sort of double entendre with the lines/forms I used, which could be interpreted as the curve of liner or lash or lip water or /or alternatively a wave/water. C

pps. Or something like the last one #79 which can be interpreted as an abstract upper lip line or beachy like sand dunes :-}

could you make key west smaller on entry 17 and 78.? thanx for all your work.

And im not sure what happened with 37 and 49 but i believe one of those was strong in the running. any chance you could re post those? thanx

did I do what you wanted for adjustments to 17 and 49 (115 and 114) correctly? or did you want the key west smaller and in reverse top to bottom like in 75? Let me know. Thanks for the feedback. Reinstated 37 and 49 also.

C

Lets stick with tweaking 75. Can you make key west a bit smaller? Thanx

okay. Let me know if that sizing is good or go up or down or what...

Thanks for the continued feedback and working with me.

C

P.S. It's #119.

Also, if you send me a private message, i can respond directly to that. That way you know that I have responded (instead of just taking a chance that you see my comment on the board),plus if I have a question and you have intiated private messaging, then i can ask you directly. If we are refining something it would probably be much more efficient. :-)

c