I like where you are going with these, especially entry #12. I'd love to see the logo in entry #11in place of those in entries #12 and #14 to see both styles. Also, in terms of colors, could you put the logo in a matte black and play with black and red? I also like the fonts in Entries #14 and #11. Thanks, very nice work.
i have included a few variations of your suggestions. I hope I haven't confused things by adding too many! please let me know if there is any other variations you would like to see. many thanks!