#4 Nice start. please take out Futbol Club, we would just like Kennesaw FC Classic Soccer Tournament for the words. Also, Kennesaw is a city rich in civil war history, and is linked to a famous locomotive train called the General. Can you incorporate a locomotive train into the design, maybe riding on the Kennesaw word underneath the ball? Or use your great imagination.. Thank you!
Many thanks for your feedback.. I am developing some ideas now that incorporate the locomotive train into the logo. I will submit these for you to see very soon! Kind regards, Francesco
KennesawFC (with the train centered above it) spacebefore the F or not.. Classic Soccer Tournament
we would like to incorporate one more color if possible, maybe red- either for the ball and the stars, or the train? or do you have another color that would look good with blue and yellow? This design looked a little empty to the upper left of the square, maybe making these changes would center it a bit more? thank you!!
I have submitted some new developments on the previous logo.. i'm not sure if it is something that you will like, however i am continuing to think of new ideas and will submit as soon as possible. Kind regards, Francesco
#23 I like the splash of yellow around this one..It makes me want to see the circle a little more abstract..(right choice of words??), I am trying to picture it on a T-shirt...Since the tournament is called the Kennesaw FC Classic, could you see what you can come up with to emphasize 'Classic" a little more, and adjust the font?
Thank you very much for the feedback. I think I understand what you mean, with the circle more abstract and the word 'classic' more emphasised, I'll have a go. Thank you again, Kind regards, Francesco.
#39, really like this one, except could you adjust Classic Soccer Tournament to have capitals only for the 3 main words, and lower case for the rest.... when the Classic and Soccer are so close together and having caps for C(on the end) and the S it did not look right....can you do a little fancier font for these 3 words also??
#42 again.. I have one more style request of this entry if you have time .. squiggles of yellow and blue around the edges like #39.... but instead of classic soccer tournament following the edge of the circle, can you have Classic in large fancy letters straight across the bottom? thanks!
Thanks very much for your feedback and I am glad you are interested in my designs.. I will make these modifications very soon and re-submit. Kind regards, Francesco
#47.. Thank you so much, i think i like 47 the best so far.. I didn't like the font on the large Classic so much... we have a committe that will be judging in the next 24-28 hrs. If you have time, and if you would like, I would very much like to request one more design- not a circle, not a shield, but something with your Italian style, your Country's love of football...you know our colors...
#47- It appears that the spacing between the W and the F of kennesaw Fc is a little off. Could you adjust the spacing to have the 'w' closer to the'a' and FC to have a tiny space away from the 'w'. To show that it is 2 words.. also, #23- how would it look if you lightened up the yellow a little? the current color is a bit darker than we would want. thank you again so much....
HI! #56 is better with the W and F a little separated... but the font at the bottom of 56 is not the same as the font at the bottom of #47...so, the top of 56, and the bottom of 47 ...I too will be leaving work soon, and I will take a look later tonight.. you must work long hours :) thank you again for your designs!
Sorry about number 56, i didn't realise my mistake before, however I have now corrected it and resubmitted! I am also working on a new design a little more modern. I'll send soon for you to see. Thanks a lot.. P.S As a soccer fan yourself, I am embarassed with the performance of the italian side so far in the world cup!! bravo the states! Kind regards, Francesco
#58 I Really Like the idea here... Love the Fonts! I just wonder how it might look if you had the kennesaw fc/classic (2 lines as is) above the circle design, and then soccer/tournament (2 lines as is) beneath the design?? or/and also, Kennesaw fc above the circle and below the circle put classic/soccer/tournament (3 lines) .......again, love the fonts-nice and strong! This has been my 1st year really following the world cup and i am hooked!!! the usa is doing ok, i would like to see the quality of our players increase to the next level...Wed for us and the UK will be a BIG day!
Ok.. I will make these changes and see how they come out! Good luck for wednesday (my girlfriend who is engligh is here with me in italy at the moment and is equally as nervous!!) Kind regards, Francesco
Hi there! I really really liked #59, but i was out-voted...We have chosen #57 as the winning design. We ask that you please review the letter spacing again with a fine tooth comb, it still seems that the W is a little far from the A in kennesaw, and that the FC is a tad too close to each other...However I want to thank you so much for your hard work, it was a tough choice as all the work was good, but yours had that extra something. I look forward to hearing back from you. Andrea
Hi Andrea, Thankyou so much for choosing my design as your winner! I have read your email and understood completely what you are saying in terms of the letter spacing. It is actually the same spacing between all of the letters, however because it is an A and a W next to each other, due to the shape of the letters it will always seem like there is a larger space inbetween them. I have changed it slightly, reducing the spacing between the A\W and increasing between the F\C. I think it now looks more natural, however tell me if it isn't quite how you would like, and we can try again. It was really nice working for you, and I hope that it is possible for me to buy a t-shirt once they are completed. Many thanks again, Francesco.
Hi Andrea, I'm really sorry for that.. I don't know why or how it sent it to you in italian as I wrote it in english. Thankyou so much for choosing my design as your winner! I read your email and understand everything you say in terms of spacing between letters. It is actually the same spacing between all the letters, however because it is an A and a W next to one another, due to the shape of the letters, it will always appear that there is a bigger space between them. I have now changed it slightly, reducing the distance between A\W and increasing between F\C. I think that it now seems a little more natural, but tell me if it isn't quite how you would like and we can try again. It was a pleasure to work for you, and I hope that it will be possible for me to buy a t-shirt once they are completed. Many thanks again, Francesco. P.S I just saw the states games.. congratulations!!