Nice! can you add some color and perhaps the reflective effect that I have seen in you other designs? so that the entire design will have a more 3D effect rather than flat?
I love what you've started with! :) Per the comment above - could you please add color and perhaps some "magic" to it (i.e. sparkle, shimmer) and dimension. Ideally it would be wonderful if the design could adapt to either a light or dark background.
#29 - love the silhouette with fedora! #30 - the K is more expressive and elegant with this font style.
#31 Can you try another colour-love the silhouette, - a great feeling about this design. I agree I think the rest of the text "the dream alive" should be bolder- could you make the e into one of MJ's armbands?- thank you
#32 Beautiful.. #34 Can you use normal title presentation please- can I see what that would look like- think also that the font could be more prominant (could you try a different font?)- thanks
#37 Place an armband around the back of the "G" with a tiny "KTDA" (ok maybe not the ktda but yes an arm band) What if the entire design were made to look like it was an arm band on a jacket or shirt sleve . side profile????? you could even fine draw an out line of MJ with a heavy black fedora- like a side view of MJ.. or is that too complicated?