Hello! I am so happy to see the wave! Finally! I very much like the idea of the wave and a circle. Could we please work on font. I'd be happy to see different font type, more dramatic, sharper and more condensed. Second thing - colors. Can we plese try it in b&W as a option? Also in color version, can we please forget about orange. Blue is good, but maybe different type of blue would fit better. Can we also try red logo and black text. Thank you! This comment references entries #28 & #29
Black & White version (I did add some gray for the one portion of the wave - I will submit one in all black and white - no gray as well). I also changed the text. I condensed it a bit more and used a sharper font. Thank you for the feedback!
Here is another typeface and some different colors to consider. You had mentioned looking at a different blue, and I think that this blue is really a great, fun color to work with. Thank you once again!
One more font for you to look at. I'm hoping we can go from there if you see one that you are leaning towards and you'd like to see some other changes. Thanks!
Thanks for submissions! Looking into all new 5 I'd say that #35 & #36 are the ones that I would like to explore further for now. For remaining ones, I will remove them as not interested.
General comment: I like the technique you used for drawing. I am not sure how to explain it, but lets call it 'slightly broken pen'. Lines are a bit harsh, partially missing ink, gives a feeling of authenticity. I like it. However, font does not correspond to above. Yes, I said earlier sharper font, but I have only spotted this now. If there is any way to bring font looking similar, that would be very interesting. Fonts in general - I think we are not there yet. Please lets try to come up with something new
I also see that you use double-line when drawing wave, giving 3D efect. Can we try to use just a flat line, like a simple one color drawing?
And last one for now - can we change all lines to solid, clean, medium bold line 'not like broken pen', but just like a new, straight from the shop.
COUld we please explore a bit more here, make line less thick and change color to grey. Clean line drawing looks good but here its too heavy. Maybe circle and wave should have different weight? thanks!
This drawing is far the best for now. I am not sure about the font, but lets concentrate on it later. When I look at te drawing, I see the sun and a wave. can we try to dress them in color? I thought of experimenting with text around the circle. Katapulci on top, slogan in the bottom. thanks! Maciej
The clean version, less thick than it was previously. I also threw a different font in there - I think that it gives similar movement to the wave - but again, it can be changed. Thanks!
Here is the clean version with some color - the colors can be changed. I used a gradient to add a little bit more to it... but they can be flat as well. Thanks for your time and fantastic feedback!
(This comment references Entry #52 ) Can we also color the font? Black one is very heavy, maybe blue one will bring a bit of lightness. Could you please also try to bring the whole sun in yellow? Gradient can stay, lets see how it works. Could we also try to use font from entry 53, in a straight line in color. I also thought about capital letters only. thanks!
(This comment references Entry #54 ) This in is still interesting. Can we do similar excercise as for 52 with color, and maybe with capital letter in text part + full blown yellow sun. thanks! Maciej
I choose this one out of the latest submissions, however, we should still look for a perfect font. I am waiting for new approach with more like the other logo. We should try to look for more 'delicate' approach, which I liked a lot in that other logo. thanks again for your hard work so far. kind regards, Maciej
So working off of the "lightness" of the cloud telecommunications logo and off of the colors that you said you liked in that one, this is the first thing that I came up with. Very similar look and feel to that one. Thanks again for the feedback!