Kadin DKI Jakarta (The Jakarta Chamber of Commerce & Industry)Logo Design Contest

the sun's rays represent hope..
everything about hope in Jakarta.
Its completely convey campaign message..
:)

If you can change the sun ray with white on #207 and make the monas more upright it would make the logo better.

Thank you very much for the feedback and placed at the 1st rank.
Here is new entry as your request and also some tweaking.
Hope you like it..

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I would lift the base of the monas higher to give the letter J a more level footing with the other letters. The flowers look a bit distracting, maybe too many of them. Maybe use other decoration with Jakarta flair? Let's see other idea you might have.

Just an idea, how bout changing the wave on the base of the logo with hands which represents 'service'. The fonts for Service City can also be improved by changing it with something that gives a 'modern' feel.

Nice Work Zie...I wish u Luck Bro!

Thank you for the advice, that's a great idea! I would like to make some tweaking and would be back to you as soon..

@Danoe: Thanks Bro, appreciated..

#244 , #245 and #246 are some entries as your request also incorporated hand (stylized) in order to represents 'services'.

I would drop all the flowers in #246.

I would like to see a version with the black hand and orange buildings for #246.

#258 done as your request..

done as your request..

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For #258 and #259, would it be possible to turn around the hand so that it will look like a right hand instead of a left one like the now?

yes, sure... #263 & #264 are the right hand version..also looks better some more.

Hi Zie, could you please make several color alternatives for #264 as the current logo is too dull. We like the idea and the forms in the logo but not quite happy with the color and the fonts. Tx.

Just an idea. How bout if you make the black area in #264 as a gradation of colors from dark on the bottom to lighter ones toward the top? And maybe blueish grey color instead of black?

Ok...wait a minute...I'll make some variation for you..

#304 , #305 , #306 , #307 are some variation for you..
Don't hesitate to ask me if you have any feedback or request.

regards,
::zie::

Sorry, still not there yet with the color bos. How bout changing the gradation from left to right instead of bottom up with right hand being darker? The hand might be better with solid color instead of gradation.

radial gradient with the centre in the sun's rays...looks the best :)

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I think this color combos looks great for you..

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Please change the hand on #310 with the hand of #308. Tx.

done as your last request..

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Please give #309 the same hand as #311. And use silver as the color of the service city. Tx.

How bout using red as the color? I think with red buildings and white fonts it gives an Indonesia feeling. The hands should be turned more orange than the current yellow. Tx.

indonesian feels...

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optional color: green for hand...represent the 'green light' city services..

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Do you have any request or need some tweaking in the logo?
I always welcome for it..

regards,
::zie::

Indonesia feel and golden hand....is that work?

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Zie, I think the hand in #313 is best. In term of color I would pick either #311 or #309. Please use the hand in #313 in those two colors. Tx again.

#316 & #317 are new entries as your last request..