#142 is promising. Can you use Jakarta's icons in addition to those flowers? I think this logo looks very nice and quite different from the others, a fresh look at Jakarta, but it needs to have some 'Jakarta' icon/ image. Good luck.
Black color for the word Jakarta may look better in #142. One other idea is to put a picture of Jakarta skyline picture with buildings on the horizon inside the letters in Jakarta. A silhouette of Jakarta skyline.
this is u'r request, with monas icon in 'J' one question for u, would u close out this contest' more than 6 days again? are u'r sure?, oww im sorry , this is not my bussines, but im afraid u'r would be confuse to much designs entering here,, thx, for my first place,, so far:)
For #174 can you make the monas clearer in orange? Please use black for the letters but use those yellowish, reddish colors like in #170 for the background flowers/ images. Use Orange for the word Service CIty. Tx.
I keep seeing you using the same color for the Jakarta font and the flowers, decorations on the back. Why can't you use black color for the Jakarta font and yellowish/ redish colors for the decorations on the back?
my update; however,, this concept just wnt to give s 'service', professional service, so, i just add a little decorate in here,with a curve line,swirl, that's says, somthink 'pure' i think' even though there's little bit flowers explosion as like antusiasm reflection totaly,, in this design not much to say ,,'pure,,, service reflection, probably wth a simple objct can made as simple massage to, that u'r client easy to know,for alitle bit time, for this case, FIRST LOOK, that u'r logo watched u'r client, mybe behind a street a traffic, excursion, or smthk activity like that,at that time wll be strong impressd at mind, this reason for me to keep it' & im not chage element to much, one word for ths concept' 'be Elegant' hope, u can smthk replay,, for this,, before ths contest wll be end, thx,