I have submitted two versions with thinner fonts #269 and #270 and made the lighter blue color a bit lighter, please check and let me know your feedback on these
Hi Dennis,
Thank you again for all of your work on this. I really appreciate your attention to the comments and helping get it dialed in. Right now we are planning on selecting this logo as the winner. Can you make a few simple changes to get it 100% dialed in? The font of the K5 is a little too bold and heavy. Do you something that is a little lighter and has a touch of movement to it? Also, can you make the lighter blue shade a little bit lighter so there is a slight amount more of contrast between the 2 blues.
Thanks again.
Grant
Layout is Great!! I think it looks very balanced now with emphasis on the K5 but not overwhelming. Let me know if you agree or feel it can be approved on more.
Can you play around with some other colorways on it? perhaps some blue-ish/grey-ish greens/blues?
Thank you again for your work with this!
Grant
The white space around K5 looks good! Can you decrease the space above the top of the leaf by 1/3 ish so there's less negative space above? The size of the leaf is good!
***Can you leave more space between the bottom and the top of the K5 so theres more white.***
***Sorry that might not be clear. More white space above the top of the K5 and more white space below the bottom of K5.
Sorry! Thanks!
Can you leave more space between the bottom and the top of the K5 so theres more white. I also like the bottom of the stem going all the way to the bottom of the of the that part. Can you shift it down and make the leaf slightly larger?
This if getting very close and looks really good! thank you!
Grant
Hi Dennis,
I really like this layout! Can you please make a few changes.
1. The scale of the leaf is overpowering compared to the rest of the logo. Can you make the leaf smaller but keep the space around it the same so the logo stays the shape.
2. Can you make the K5 taller? I'd like to see the 'box' around the k5 be larger and more of a square.
Thanks,
Grant
Hi Dennis,
Thank you for making these changes. The 5 is much more identifiable and I like the font. Can you play around with the orientation of the abstract mark, K5 and Laboratories? I'd like to see some different ways this could all lay out.
Thanks,
Grant
Hi Dennis,
Thank you for these iterations. Can you use the colors of gray and green that you used in number #61? I would like to see how they look in that tone. Also, I’m concerned the five looks a little too much like an S. Can you mess around with the font and see if there is a five that would have more of a rounded bottom?
Thanks.
Grant
Hi Dennis,
I like the changes you’ve made to the style of the K in #64. Can you use that font/color with the abstract mark with the leaf like in #64 but use the layout like you have in this design, #61 ?
Thanks
Grant
Hello,
I like the abstract mark with the leag and the colors you've used. Can you produce some iterations of this with different font type and color for both the K5 and Laboratories. The comparative scale is very good too btw.
Thanks for your work on this!
Grant
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Perfect! thanks again!
Grant
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Dennis
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Thank you again for all of your work on this. I really appreciate your attention to the comments and helping get it dialed in. Right now we are planning on selecting this logo as the winner. Can you make a few simple changes to get it 100% dialed in? The font of the K5 is a little too bold and heavy. Do you something that is a little lighter and has a touch of movement to it? Also, can you make the lighter blue shade a little bit lighter so there is a slight amount more of contrast between the 2 blues.
Thanks again.
Grant
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Dennis
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its midnight here at my place will submit in the morning.
Regards
Dennis
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Can you play around with some other colorways on it? perhaps some blue-ish/grey-ish greens/blues?
Thank you again for your work with this!
Grant
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Your views Grant..??
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Dennis
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***Sorry that might not be clear. More white space above the top of the K5 and more white space below the bottom of K5.
Sorry! Thanks!
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This if getting very close and looks really good! thank you!
Grant
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I have made two layouts based on your input, please check #247 and #248 for updated designs
Regards
Dennis
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I really like this layout! Can you please make a few changes.
1. The scale of the leaf is overpowering compared to the rest of the logo. Can you make the leaf smaller but keep the space around it the same so the logo stays the shape.
2. Can you make the K5 taller? I'd like to see the 'box' around the k5 be larger and more of a square.
Thanks,
Grant
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Dennis
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Can you use this drop as the abstract mark but on the layout like #127? and place the drop above the K5?
Thanks,
Grant
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Can you move the abstract mark above the K5 so it's a more vertical layout?
Thanks,
Grant
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Dennis
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Thank you for making these changes. The 5 is much more identifiable and I like the font. Can you play around with the orientation of the abstract mark, K5 and Laboratories? I'd like to see some different ways this could all lay out.
Thanks,
Grant
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Dennis
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Thank you for these iterations. Can you use the colors of gray and green that you used in number #61? I would like to see how they look in that tone. Also, I’m concerned the five looks a little too much like an S. Can you mess around with the font and see if there is a five that would have more of a rounded bottom?
Thanks.
Grant
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Dennis
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I like the changes you’ve made to the style of the K in #64. Can you use that font/color with the abstract mark with the leaf like in #64 but use the layout like you have in this design, #61 ?
Thanks
Grant
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Thanks for the feedback, I have revised the design with text in color and with different fonts, please check #64 and #65.
Regards
Dennis
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I like the abstract mark with the leag and the colors you've used. Can you produce some iterations of this with different font type and color for both the K5 and Laboratories. The comparative scale is very good too btw.
Thanks for your work on this!
Grant