Jumbo Bright PromptersLogo Design Contest

From a microphone cable I made the contour of an eye. This way, I brought together the idea of the speech (the microphone) with the idea of reading/prompter (the eye). I hope you`ll like it.

Please let me know if you would like to see any changes (fonts, colors, layout etc).
Thank you.

Try without the mic
The mic is an interesting concept. The speakers don't really experience the screens, the screens are far away. The mic and the stage is what they experience. Expanding on that mic concept (with or without the eye) could be interesting.

We like the white space, the clean lines and the color of the blue.

Give us a version of this without the grey in the eye please.

Thank you for your feedback and appreciation.

Here are the revised versions: #33 #34 #35

All the best.

The mic is so elegant - love it. However, we think it looks like improv or speaker training and will be confusing so that's why it's out.

Try on this concept: creating some space between the lower eyelid and the eyeball. Or, some space between the eyelid and the eyeball (retina)

Here are the revised versions: #55 #56 #57
I hope I understood well your request.

All the best.

Can you please try:
"Prompters" 20% larger and maybe darker. It's a little lost right now

Please incorporate the tagline.
"Innovative Teleprompters. Confident Presenters."

We would request as final files B&W, reverse, square (for social networking) and the AI file so please be thinking of that.

Also, can you try a little space between "jumbo" and "bright"? We like the look but the company name is two separate words and management is a little worried that the words will get confused as one word moving forward.

The updated versions: #64
Also, I`ve uploaded the BW, reverse and icon version as per your request: #65 #66 #67.
As you can see, there won`t be a problem in providing them.

Regards.

The managers are asking for "the essence of an eye." On clarifying questions I found: "It has to have an eyeball and not just the outline" "When people look at it we want them to know it's an eye but more abstract."

On existing: Create a little more space between the tagline and "Prompters"

With all due respect, I didn't get this:

"The managers are asking for "the essence of an eye." On clarifying questions I found: "It has to have an eyeball and not just the outline" "When people look at it we want them to know it's an eye but more abstract."

Could you enlighten me on this?

Thank you.

My understanding is, more abstract. The same layout and proportions but the graphic not quite so bold.

Something like this? ##68
I`ve added the eyeball and made the space between the tagline and "Prompters" bigger.

Thank you.

#68
Round the grey - it looks a little square
delete the lines next to "prompters"
more space between "prompters" and the tagline (about double)
don't italicize the tagline font

In the B&W version we want to drop the reflection (two small circles). We think in that version it looks like a spec in the eye but in color it looks like a reflection.

The revised versions, as follows:
- rounded grey, without the lines and more space between the "Prompters" and the tagline (non-italic font): #69 with it`s BW version: #70
- same as the above but with a little smaller grey, fully justify "Prompters": #71 and it`s BW version #72

All the best.

ok, I think #69 is what we're fine tuning now.

Can we please see a version of a bigger tagline? In order to do this you'll have to put it on two lines, centered. The placement and the space from the name is good, they just want to see a bigger font.

Also, can we see a B&W version of this? We're thinking that for B&W we might need to drop that grey in the eye and also drop the reflections (the two small circles in the upper right of the eye).

When we finalize this can we have the AI files and how might that get transferred? Is dropbox ok?

Also, I just learned we can extend, which we did. Please don't feel you have to work on Easter! Happy Easter and Passover :)

Here are the revised versions, with bigger tagline #73 and with the BW in two versions of the iris #74 #75

Regarding your other question, things work here basically like this:
- after you`ll end your contest (choose me as the winner), I will send via LogoTournament the files for the winning design.
- In the same time, I will receive your e-mail (the address you used for subscribing to LogoTournament). This way, I can send directly to your e-mail all the extra files you`ll need, including the .ai, of course.

I`m an orthodox so I`ll celebrate Easter only the next week. But Happy Easter to you!

Regards.

for entry 69:
Please put the tagline on two lines to allow the font to be much bigger.

We've had some feedback that the eye looks angry. I'm wondering if we can make the pupil bigger and if that would help?

Please submit 2 versions of the eye, both with the tagline larger on two lines

For the B&W version: try grey instead of a solid line on the outer line of the eyeball (the eye lid is fine)

Almost done I'm hoping ! Feedback has been a bit challenging for me to get on this project :)

Hopefully they`re better now: #76 #77 #78 #79

Thank you.

I love these. I feel like the client is going to ask for an even bigger tagline. Go twice as big on that font if you would and hopefully I can close this out today ! ;)

I love these. I feel like the client is going to ask for an even bigger tagline. Go twice as big on that font if you would and hopefully I can close this out today ! ;)

I`ve enlarged the slogan. I didn`t go twice as big because it would have been too big, bigger than "PROMPTERS". It think it is big enough to be easily red: #80 #81 #82 #83

Thanks.

We'd like the files for 82 & 81 please. I'm selecting the winner now. Thanks for your patience!

I'm glad you like them.
I'll wait for you to declare me as the winner and, after that, I'll send you the requested files.

Thank you.