These are all good examples of designs that do a good job of nailing our target audience. The one comment I got from my partners pretty consistently was that the eyes of the robot are a bit sinister. Personally, I thought they were more on the "whacky" side and I liked it - but perhaps we can try something a bit more silly. We all thought the mouth was funny. Of the layouts - I prefer 29 but the straw gets lost pretty much altogether. Also - I like the play on gaming with the box but we need to see if there is a way to move away from the gameboy feel as we don't play in that platform or anything particularly similar. I like that #31 shows the design is still strong in one color print if needed. I am not sold on any of the fonts - I really like the evolution of the robot and I think the layout in #29 is pretty cool - but I'm just not sold on the fonts. I also think media could be minimized a fair bit more if that helps.
The box is supposed to be a mouse... please let me know what you think about that, I have another ideas to the squished box, just let me know if this are the right way.
We really like what you did with the box / mouse - we all thought that was real creative. Generally, we really like the robot graphic but feel that maybe the text needs to be more basic. The general view is that there is enough going on with the robot that it doesn't need much happening with the fonts. We also wondered if the mouse cord could be used almost as a border by looping it part way around the text (not sure how to explain that) as opposed to pluging it into media.
OK - I'm loving the direction this is heading. Definitely one of the top two right now - though I haven't had time to discuss with my partners as I was in other meetings most of the day - but I know they are going to really like both of these designs (50 and 51 - and now 52). I will definitely get new rankings up tomorrow just as soon as I get their feedback.
we really like the original mouse you did (square but without the scroll button) but we'd like that with the new layout and font you did for 53. We also really liked 51 but again would prefer it with the old box / mouse. Generally speaking, I prefer the simplicity of the font in 51.
I don't see us going with 61 or 63 for our overall brand - but one of my partners really likes that look and we may want to talk about buying one of those designs so we can use it for something else - like a decal, t-shirt or mousepad
here is Entry #69, I take out elements of the robot to make it look more simple, I use the original box/mouse, without the scroll, then make bigger the tummy screen, and put the JB of the Juice Box.
let me know what you think about this, and I ´m a bit confused with the font, is that one used on Entry #69 what you like???
Thanks for your great feedback, has to be hard give feedback in each new entry.
OK - we actually like #69 but we prefer the original meter you had on the chest instead of the initials. We also really like 74 but would like to see it with a more basic straw - it's as if it has just a lttle too much going on in the design and that might simplify it just enough.