Can you get rid of propeller line in O and take out .com and make tag line a little bigger and move so it is right justified? I like the idea of movement. See other note on "door" below.
With 2nd drawing, can you lose the cross at the front and put other tag line "Be and help others become"
Here's our challenge...I like the movement element/art in 67 & 66 because we could make it rotate for power point/website, etc. and could use it later as bullet points, etc in print material. It just isn't the right one or too overpowering or not balanced or something. We've discussed pointing the propeller to the right a little like people have a direction to go or changing the pinwheel design element in 46. The other choice that we are really considering is the one ranked #2 except that its art looks like Chrysler. I know this is a lot of work and do appreciate it.
I wanted you to know how hard this choice was for us. You came in 2nd but you come in 1st in my book for being willing to listen to your client and help us. The design firm & experts really liked the 1st choice followed very closely by yours. My printer in particular liked yours because it was easy to reprint. I wish you much success in the future and have no doubt you'll get it with your customer service. Thanks. Linda