hello, thanks for the feedback. This mark is more abstract, representing a global human network #378 - did not want to draw people because these are very much. logo is more corporate, clean and elegant.
Thank you for your submission...we are in the Top 5 phase!
I really like the idea of #379 and I'm not sure we could do much to change the graphic portion other than to, maybe, play with some different dark blue, really dark purple or grey shadings with some gradients to really give it a 3D look.
On the text: - I like that the JNR is bold but it is too bold and the Networks is a bit too thin. The JNR still needs to be bolder than the Networks but can we make it a little more subtle? One way to do this might be to use two different colors and blend them...probably colors similar to what you are using on the graphic. - The People Helping People section needs to be a bit darker so it can be read.
Thank you for the feedback. ok, no problem, tomorrow (CET) I'll play around font and the logo mark to make it more 3D, of course, not too much. I'll send also other versions of the logo, such as B&W, one color - on a light and dark background so you can see how they work - without losing legibility.
modifications: all versions have changed the ratio between the thicknesses "JNR" and "Networks"
#414 #415 #416 – colors - the logomark and font #417 – Improved color of #379, changed the proportions between the logomark (less - 15%) and font #418 #419 – changed the proportions between the logomark (less - 15%) and font / one color on a white bgd #420 – Improved color of #379, dark background #421 #422 – one color on a dark background #424 logomark (zoom) on a dark background
Thank you for the design updates. I think the purple ends up being a bit too much so I've ranked #379 and #415 together as we like parts of both. Let us decide the concept we like the best and, if this goes into the final phase, and we select this design, we can tweak on colors, shading, etc.
Thank you for the latest revisions. I like the deeper shading and I really like the deep blue/purple coloring you are developing in #415 and #428. My only concern is that, with the shading being so deep, the people are really accentuated and the blue ball is almost lost. I'm not sure that is horrible but could you try something using the coloring from #428 but reverse the way you do the shading so it looks like the people are more inlaid into the ball instead of how they are presently popping out? This would be somewhat similar to #379 but with some shading to set the people deeper into the ball and the darker blue shading.
I like the depth in #431 but just noticed that the lines of the people are thinner in #379 which makes it a bit more obvious that they are overlaid on the ball. Moving forward, I'd like to look at making those lines slightly thinner like they are on #379. Other than that, I have some text tweaks but we can wait on that till we get to the final judging as I don't want to ask you to do too much until we are 100% sure this is the direction we're going.