I really like the start. I like 11 better than 12 because the JD stands out more. Trouble with both is I can't read the slogan. I know it's only about 3" x 3" but if there is a way to increase size/font slightly so I can read it or at least tell post comment what it says. Thanks.
I'm sorry, I still can't read the slogan in any of the versions. Also, I like the JD logo imitating a bun and ice cream, but it is not obvious enough--several people had no idea that it was a JD and/or bun and ice cream.
If you google Burgerparlour in UK, that is more what we are thinking of.
Also, we would like to get away from generic 'restaurant' term and have something more descriptive/creative, ie 'grille and parlour', 'sandwich and ice cream shoppe', ect.....