#17 Thank you for your entry i really like the boldness and fluidness of the main heart, and how it picks up the feel of the adoption heart. But too many little hearts...too feminine, especially dotting the j and i. (don't withdraw this though...when I get more entries, I am asking other "judges" to give opinions and rank) And I'd lke to see Jewish be the same thin font as the other words for equal emphasis (or the other words bold like jewish).
Also, can I possibly see the heart with a star of david (6-point) int the middle?
Final thought -oh oh..you asked for comments :) would this work if your bold heart was smaller and dotted the j with the name larger of course?