hi thank you for joining. #19 was the kind of look that caught my attention in another contest. However, Jewish is too bold compared to the other words. And.the 3 words really have equal weight, so need to be on one line and also shown on 3. #20 makes me feel as if the heart is in a star jail. :) Thank you
thank you, but you are on the wrong track. #19 is similar to the dog logo of yours that caught my attention...I liked how the star was cut into the name itself. (as the dog was in the other contest). Is there any variation of #19? As I mentioned above, the name needs to be lower case with the weight equal of all three words - either all bold or all thin. But I really liked how the star cut into the name.
#18 (getting input from the committee now!) They liked the star/heart design. Would rather have family emphasized or have the names stacked down the side. Also asked if the star/heart could dot the j
#78....that is also a favorite (seems to be tied with 16). question regarding how it would be used on a business card or horizontally. Maybe if the #19 layout was not so heavy in the Jewish..or across one line thanks
#90 i like the hooked j but not the y in family - it is too straight opposite for 92 48 and 47- ilike how the b&w one has service moved a bit to the left so the y in family isn't hidden thank you
can 95 have the letters outlined in white as you did in the original? The overlayed letters read better. Is there a way to show the dot? Not sure if needed, just wondering.
thank you...i like the outline, but it really does look better w/o the dots as you had it. don't make any other changes yet. I'm waiting for feedback from the committee to see what direction they want to go. I really like 96 and 98 with the extra line (only ranked one to not confuse the committee). Thank you for participating sherry
whew...long conference call. Everyone on the call likes the look of 97. We like the extra little swoop line, how the star cuts into the name, and how the "star on the go" can be used as a design element.
But on the stacked version 98 they aren't so sure.
1. Can you separate the lines a little in 98 so they aren't so cramped? Showing the letters with white outlines as in 78 will help.
2. show the two versions in black and white. They are afraid 97 in one color may be difficult to read. Would it work if there was a tiny extra space between the words?
3. there was discussion if the star was a heart
4. discussion also re: having the words in one color (blue) and the line under the star in purple.