THis is great and still my first choice. I might like it better if the J was easier to read, and possibly if the rest was slightly more refined / fancy?
Here is my variation. I have cleaned up the "j" to make it more legible and fancied up the writing with a custom script. Thanks for the great feedback.
I like the "Jason Williams" part of the #30, but one thing I've realized in this whole deal is I don't like the "logo" or graphical part to match the "text" part. They need to be different, so they offset each other.
Thanks again for the feedback. I have scrubbed the initial idea and gone with an abstract representation of a camera lens which turned out great I think.
OK...I liked the abstract idea overall...it's just not me. Your first submission still has a chance of winning fyi...my wife likes the first one best, but I'm leaning towards yours. I just stare a lot at all of them and try to figure it out. I'm the kind of guy who makes fun of abstract art hahah - plus I like the branding of my initials. If you want to get more creative, throw something a little more hardcore at me...tattoo type graphics? Just so you get my personal style, I wear a lot of Affliction...which is skulls, angel wings, etc. I know I can't go too far with that because I'm working with women and brides too often, but if you can come up with something in between? I don't know lol - this is why I'm on this site! Thanks!
OK - LOVEEEE your idea, hate the logo though! Mostly because of the heart. If you can stay the course here you have a great chance of winning this. Want to really rock it - work the JW into the design of #51 and make it less feminine. I know it's some extra work, but so far no one else has taken my advice. Way to listen! I can check and respond all day tomorrow. Saturday I'll be on my iphone all day so it will be harder to respond.
ok #54 is killer. So far we are thinking that's going to be it....but...you still have room to make it better. Problem is I'm not sure how haha. Maybe a LITTLE grittier? Just a little tougher look? Wish I had more specific direction...I'm hoping I get more submissions like this though. Great work.
Excited to see you like the design as much as me. I have tweaked the accents and added some elements but dont want to go overboard as it may start to get too complex. Let me know what you think.
very unlike me but i just noticed the spelling error in photography. This one is a new layout with that fixed. I will fix it for your favourite pick if you have one.
haha - i never paid a bit of attention to the spelling because I know I can easily recreate the bottom section of type. I like the extra "things" on the bottom of the circle. My wife said..."make it fancier, when I think photography i think fancy" haha. I'm not sure I agree, but she likes the one with the white background from Cit better. I don't, but I understand what she is saying. Maybe if the lines were thinner? Or maybe the word she is looking for is more ornate?
Just FYI - there is a chance I will most likely extend the competition since it is ending virtually in the middle of superbowl. Just depends on how I'm feeling about the final results. Thanks again...I appreciate your input!
took some time but here is a more ornate wing design. I have tried to create a 3d type effect where the wings appear to be lifting off the screen. Let me know how you go.
I really like it. Check out #113 which could be our first choice if you want one more direction to go. I really appreciate all your hard work on these concepts. Your design is still a strong possibility for our final choice...we just aren't ready to make the call yet.