you can call me Helmi or ceploq, Thankyou for ranked, #22 and #23 using intial business name style as "JF", I Hope you love it, and will be great if You have a feedback for my designs, and please do not hesitate to ask me if you want any revision for my designs, thankyou
#23 is still my preferred design but could you play with the shape of it for me with out losing the basic shape?
I like how it feels like the "J" is supporting the "F". Its almost like the "F" is laying across the "J" and the overall shape has a great feeling of movement. What I'd like is if the shape looked less like letters. If you could play with making the shape less like letters but more like people without looking like letters or people while still keeping the feeling of support and movement this will achieve exactly what I'm looking for.
To put it another way, I'd like a shape that was more abstract and what I'm suggesting is that as you abstract the shape of the letters you think about the shape of the human form and use the human form to influence how you abstract the shape.
Ideally, I'd want to keep the feeling of movement and support. I'd like to keep the circular feeling of the design. I'd just like it if when looking at it, one didn't see letters or people but a shape that was influenced by both.
In #23, the two shapes are not connected. It would be better if they are not connected.
In #23, where the two shapes touch each other they have matching curves, one convex and the other concave. This is important to keep.
I liked #23 because it had a certain feeling. The "F" feels like it is being supported by the "J". If this was two bodies, imagine that the "J" was a body bent forward and the "F" was laying on the "J's" back.