Jack Out of the BoxLogo Design Contest

here my ideas,
J out the box and if you can see the par of the "J" make an arrow in same time

hope you like

best regards

Thank you, HerDish. I like the simplicity and elegance of this, especially the fine lettering and the all-caps treatment. I don't care as much for the shifted "j" out of the box as the continued line for the "j". I also like the gray shade. Might you play a bit more with the gray as the main color, and accents of the purple and/or green? Also, can you show a few other variations with a larger tagline (maybe decked) and other variations for the icon itself? Something's not quite "on" about that for me yet.

hi jack
thanks again for comment and considering my work
here some other ideas
#40 #41 #42 #43 #44 #45 #46 #47 #48

#45 - the white space in middle of box is a part of dot of 'j' and the dot is out the box

hope you like

best regards
-HerDish

Thank you, HerDish. I really enjoy the font you've chosen, and it seems so refined and clean. #40 (and #43) are my favorites. But I'm wondering if you can show me a few variations as follows:

1) Make tagline more readable, putting "message management" together, perhaps on same line as design? I do like that design is separated out, but those should stay together. Can you try making it the full width of the company name?

2) For #44, I like the iconic shape. But, I'm wondering if you can show me a complete box on the bottom left (draw the green line to complete the box) and then have the top right corner "out" as you have it now?

3) Again, for #40/#43, can you try to put the other corners of the box on the bottom "J" hook? It may not work, but I'm wondering if that would help complete the box look?

4) Can you try re-introducing the deep purple in the "out of the box" part of the name?

Thank you thank you!

hi jack
thanks again for comment and considering my work

here the evolution of #40 per your request
#58 - in line tagline
#59 - with purple
#60 #61 - reversed color
#62 - hook J with box/arrow

#63 #64 #65 - evolution of #44

as you know im the first introducing arrow as the part of the "J"

hope you like my work
if you need any to change please ask me

best regards

HerDish

HerDish ... thank you again. These are really shaping up nicely. One last request, as I don't think I explained myself well before on one of my possibilities. For the original #44, can you please just show me the green border portion of the box extended so it meets the gray outline? So, the box is connected on the bottom left corner but still hallow? Also, can you please show me a version with the tagline larger and decked two lines? Designs can be larger as well.

Also, for #60, can you show it as is but with the "J" hook as that deep purple. The rest would stay the same.

hi jack, thanks for considering my work
here evolution of #44

#77 #78 #79

other version of #60

#80 #81

thank you

if you need anything to change please let me know

best regards
HerDish

Oh! I love #78. Can you please change the tagline to read:

Small Business Design (still in green on first line)
and Message Management (for second line in gray)

And, one more request ... just a bit more spacing between "out" "of" "the" "box"

hi again jack
thanks for considering my work
here revision per your request

changing the tagline:
#84 - keep the word "out of the box" as #78
#85 - separating
#86 - separating with color

if you need any to change please ask me

best regards

HerDish

Thank you again! I'm really loving the way this one shaped up. Can you let me know the name of the font?

hello jack,
im using larsseit font with little tweak to the J on "JACK" letter
and here some other version,

#109 - tagline same large
#110 - accent to orange

best regards
HerDish

Can you do one more variation and then I should be set? Can you show me #109 and #110 with deep purple instead of orange accent. Just for comparison. Thank you!

I can't decide on spread out "message management" vs. tight. Do you have an opinion or preference?

hello jack
here revision as you wish
actually i've already made the purple accent yesterday, but im not able to submit it.

tweaking of #109 (spreaded second tagline)
#121 - purple
#122 - green

tweaking of #110 (tight)
#123 - purple
#124 - green

dark purple accent is nice, since your website colour dominate by deep purple and green, purple 50:55 green.


first i made tight second tagline on #45

tight "message management" word, make it more clean, more simple, centered to other word, and easy to read, and flexible sense applied.

spread out "message management" word, make it more blocked and strong sense applied on it.
the tagline it self more thin than the "JACK" word.

sum:
spread : strong sense, block
tight : clean, simple, easy to read, movement (flexible)

anything please just let me know

best regards
-HerDish

sorry for my bad english sir,
please let me know if you dont understand with my explanation

I love the purple reintroduced there. Thank you. Can we try the "Small business designs" in the same purple and tightening up the distance between "jack" and "out of the box"? Then, keep the distance between the company name and the tagline? This is feeling really good. Thank you!

#130 - purple tagline, tightening up the space


HerDish

#131 - spreaded tagline

another colour variation working on #130

#143 - reversed green to purple

#144 - changing just "JACK" color

#145 - reversed the icon

#146 - viewing reverse background, maybe its benefit for your business card.