We like this direction. Trying to figure out the right shape for the lines behind it. Can you try to make the lines be more circular around the white circle? I don't like how it comes to a point At the top and bottom. Need it to feel like a white circle within a lined circle.
Another variation I'd love to see is if the lines inside the circle broke up a bit at different lengths.
Regarding font - I don't love the A without the line. Would love to see some variations with thinner letters or an option thats more rounded, or with some line breaks in the letters - just to give a very subtle unique look.
Can you try a variation that combines this and #422 - where the lines form a rounder shape around the circles. But not with the two tone, just black and white.
Like this direction. Ditch the tagline (sometime changing one thing...)
My one issue is that the vertical lines remind me of an audio waveform (think soundcloud) which is totally not our space. Can you modify those lines so they dont give that impression?
Really like the white circle inside the lines idea.
Also - try spacing out the island letters and give a thinner, simple sophisticate typography to it.
The idea behind my design was to have a circle but not enclosed. I wanted to give it a computer related feeling. The dots represent secure enclosed data while the connected dots represent the users working together. I made one line purple to suggest that "changing one thing, changes everything".
Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc).
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Another variation I'd love to see is if the lines inside the circle broke up a bit at different lengths.
Regarding font - I don't love the A without the line. Would love to see some variations with thinner letters or an option thats more rounded, or with some line breaks in the letters - just to give a very subtle unique look.
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This became my favorite.
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The dots with lines make it look a bit too complex though. Can you try some in this direction that's a bit more simplified?
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I hope you`re having a wonderful day.
Thank you for your great feedback and appreciation.
These are a few variations and some new ideas involving cloud working spaces. Please let me know what do you think of them.
If you need any other revisions please feel free to ask. Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you & kind regards.
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My one issue is that the vertical lines remind me of an audio waveform (think soundcloud) which is totally not our space. Can you modify those lines so they dont give that impression?
Really like the white circle inside the lines idea.
Also - try spacing out the island letters and give a thinner, simple sophisticate typography to it.
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Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc).
Thank you.