Intown Dental CenterLogo Design Contest

Hi,
here are my designs for you.
Entry #166 represents abstract swan with the wings created from an abstract tooth shape.
If you have any suggestion, I would be happy to hear.

Thanks,
Bordo

two swans #169
Colors can be adjusted at any time.

Prefer the one swan - e.g. #165. Can we see in darker colors - and positioned over the text.

We like #163 the way it intertwines.

Can you come up with any family symbols (father, mother, son) that intertwine.

Vielen Danke!

Thank you very much for your feedback!
I will submit soon couple of new variations, based on your suggestions.

Bordo

We really like the bold clean look of your modification.

Thank you!! :)
Here is new variation with horizontal layout #179

#179 is nicely done. We really would like to see an abstract family in a similar style. Would you be able to do that?

Here is an abstract family created in the same style #180
I used for this variation solid colors just to show you how it looks, but I will submit in next several minutes
variation with subtle 3D effects as I used for entry #173

here is new variation with family created with subtle 3D effects #182
Gray swan is father, blue swan is a mother and gray/blue is a child :)

new variation with gold/gray colors #185

I like the swan on the side in #179. Can you change the grey swipe color on the swan and in "Intown" to gold and try adding a reflection below the swan.

Sure! I will submit it shortly!

Like this #186 ?

update #188

I like how you changed the text format in #187. Can you try it with the swan on top?

update #189

variation #190

We are still concerned that we are not getting an image of "intown" or "family" but like #189 - so can you put a silhouette of Atlanta skyline ( see below) behind the swan

http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://desktopnature.com/4334-2/Atlanta%2BSkyline%2Bat%2BSunset_%2BGeorgia.jpg&imgrefurl=http://desktopnature.com/Nature-World-Travel/Atlanta%2BSkyline%2Bat%2BSunset_%2BGeorgia.jpg.html&h=480&w=640&sz=81&tbnid=iiU0z4qy-5POyM:&tbnh=103&tbnw=137&prev=/search%3Fq%3Datlanta%2Bskyline%26tbm%3Disch%26tbo%3Du&zoom=1&q=atlanta+skyline&usg=__xlCiHqzrFQ3OmA7aalGBEzyhYiw=&sa=X&ei=ytrzTceWFsrdgQfgg7jtCw&ved=0CCkQ9QEwAA

- see for example link below of how that might work. It might be nice that it curves around the top of the swan.

http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.petekelly.com/images/509_Swan_Skyline.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.petekelly.com/photographygalleries/newyorkstateofmind.html&usg=__WIWzMpBM2GcSJjSWT-lrU4FlpHM=&h=648&w=509&sz=119&hl=en&start=15&sig2=ieF9nK0rEJkoCkRxCrBZWQ&zoom=1&um=1&itbs=1&tbnid=trHxh6Q1pIRGhM:&tbnh=137&tbnw=108&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dswans%2Bskyline%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26sa%3DN%26rls%3Dcom.microsoft:en-us%26tbm%3Disch&ei=LdrzTc-8CoHVgQfd2eymDQ

I will try.
In the mean time you can check my new variation #191

color of #190 and shadow of #191 please. Vielen Danke!

Bitte schön #192 :)

I tried to add skyline behind the swan but it looks too much busy :(
I will keep on trying and if I find some nice and elegant solution, I will definitely submit it.

I understand - and yes, we don't want it to be busy but we have faith in you!

Right now the swan is not capturing family or intown and we have to change that.!

Thanks for your understanding!
I will try to give my best to come up with the solution that will captures all elements that you have requested
but keeping at the same time elegant and sophisticated look.

Yes the look is elegant and sophisticated.

How about adding two baby swans - so we'd have a "family"?

Or making the sitiscape greeyed out and sublted buildings - not so much a skyline?

for example - moving the swan to the right still above intown and adding two baby swans following in front of a grey silhoette of buildings? Then you have a family intown! Wonderbar!

:) I promise I will give my best!

Sounds good - I'll let that creative mind of yours work.

will you try the tagline in red? Thanks

here is variation with light gray skyline and with two baby swans #194

same composition but with the red tagline #194

ok we like the skyline - how about 3 flying swans one large, medium, small. We like some other flying swans we saw.....

#194 how about making chicks much much smaller?

Let's try #192 with the city scape behind it. Also, please remove the lines beside the tag line. And "center" not "centar".