Entry 104: like the fonts for the name.. like the colors.. the block symbol at the left. I'm not fond of the font for the block.. I like the lines intersecting the letters. just not the letters themselves. I guess it looks a little elementary. Make a more sophisticated looking block.. anxious to see.
Entry 110: I like the new block.. and your use of color. How would this translate into just tones of black and white? The logo won't always be able to be in color.. so how it looks in greytones is also important.
Here it is in gray tones. Let me know if you'd like to see any other changes. I can provide it in several color combos if you would like. Might be nice to use different color blocks in different seasons.
I just wanted to point out that the logo that is in second place copied my logo after you put it at #1. Same shape - same type fonts. They only submitted this after you moved mine to the #1 spot. I really hope you will keep this in mind. I worked very hard at coming up with a unique logo for you. Spent time working on the fonts, etc. I hope you will award originality. Thank you for your time. :)
logome is submitting many new concepts that look exactly like mine. I am just really frustrated when I spent that time on your logo and then people just do this at the end and copy.
OH... glad you participated this time. I like your approach. I did send an invitation to a friend who is a graphic designer. Her comment on both my first and second selections is that they were not as current as the 4th and 5th. Not that it would sway me completely. But in the world of graphic design,, I am the lay-person. I do also respect her opinion. Could you comment on that? I know you have worked very hard on this. just sending your way in these last days for flexibility.
I just posted a new version. When reading over who your clients are (mostly healthcare), I think the logo needs to be modern but be very professional at the same time. I think the new version does both. Let me know what you think. Thanks!!
I just read your comment from the 8th.. sorry for being so slow to get back. I trust that was Entry #158? All true in regards to the professionalism.. and current nature of the appearance. I am still so drawn to the script.. but like your thoughts on modernism. What if you kept the vertical line, and had another horizontal line , picking up at the point that is under the "IP" and continuing between the "Interior Perspectives"? That would in a subtle way, illustrate the architectural aspect of my work. These are suggestions., you may have thoughts of your own. I think that the balance in scale between the two words (Interior Perspectives) in Option One, is good. In #158, "perspectives" is a bit small.
#163. Humm. The new grey horizontal line does not line up with anything... not so sure I like that . I feel the " INTERIOR" would need to be a bit smaller and 'perspectives" a bit bigger for the total to read as the entire name. I had a thought of placing the square in the upper left area of the cross-bars, but that seemed forced .. and not in the needed direction. I'm still open to thoughts however.
#164 The only comment I would have is to ask if you think that "perspectives" is a large enough font to relate to the "interior" part - as a total name and brand? I'm glad you kept the script, and keeping it gray is good.
I had posted a request to LT the day before in regards to the "one time - 3 day extension". They replied to that right after posting that comment. I felt that I needed to allow that, since I had asked for it previously.
JedaCreative..I am keeping this one as #1 for now; because only that place can be modified during the Judging time. After further thought I do need a fresher look than where I was going before. I really respect your integrity to design, and you have spent much time to date. I will say that I do also very much like the strength and fresh approach to the design in the #2 spot.
Here is one more submission from me - to give it a fresher look. Used leave for dot on the "i" and used lower case font. It still has an architectural look but is also new and modern. Let me know what you think :)
I don't think I particularly like the leaf. I can appreciate the thought..& could make it personal to say that you are always growing as a professional., but I think I like the square better. In regards to the lower case letters., I'm thinking about it. But we still have five more days, I think to develop this path before choosing?
Would you make one, using only orange and gray. Possibly the "PERSPECTIVES" would be in orange, keep the most recent with lower case fonts, etc.. Make the square orange and grey, with an orange square dot to the "I" .. Thank You!
One final tweek. Could you put the caps back in the "INTERIOR" , like in #163? "perspectives" is fine the way it is, lower case, in gray.. I would like to see both this direction and if the grey could be a bit warmer?
Thank You! A personal footnote.,, my parents have been ill, and their care has somewhat interrupted the focus I could place on the Tournament. Sorry about intermittent changes and jockeying of the candidates.