Don't feel like you have to copy off our original draft of this, feel free to branch out and be completely different as well... trying to keep similar color palette. Ultimately, we may change the coloring slightly (we'll provide color codes) to coordinate, if necessary.
All great start submissions... and don't feel you have to incorporate the slogan, ultimately we are thinking we won't want the slogan in the logo.. as the logo will be used on business cards, website and contracts primarily.