Great start RapyDesign. I don't mind the logo, it is perhaps a little sharper & more symmetrical than I am hoping for. I would prefer the black to be down the bottom, I have ranked the design with 3 colours but also like te other one. I would prefer the "inspire" part to be emphasised over tribe. I am keen to see a logo that incorporates more design in the words rather than just black text. To give you an idea of what I like I have gon through some of your previous designs. The ones that catch my eye are: . Spark SF . Street walk 360 . ITeaBar . My Design Albi Renova . Paint block . Social simple . Basel electrical. . Product scoop . Wire glass . The one u I hope this helps! Nikk. :)
Thank you for the ranking and feedback. I will work on more designs that might suit what you're looking for more based on the description you just gave. I'll submit soon. :)
Thanks for the new versions R! I really like the way you are heading. Thanks for #23, I think the black colour works better at the top the way you had it in #7!
Can I ask you to play a bit more with the idea of changing the "i" like you have done in #24
Could you try placing >>>> Inspire above >>>>. Tribe So they fit together well and the dot on the 'i' in 'tribe' is made to look like its lighting up the 'i' in 'inspire' I think in this case 'tribe' may need to be more bold than the 'inspire' And, perhaps 'tribe' could be the same colour as the 'i' in 'inspire'.... Or tribe is black and 'insp re' is burnt orange Or whatever you think!! It doesnt have to be burnt orange.. red or deep burnt orange or a combination could be good.
Would it also be possible to create a logo using the symbol image (So you take whatever you have done with the dot on the 'i' in 'tribe' and the 'i' in 'inspire' and pull it out to create a logo that may or may not go to the side of the words...)
I don't mind the symbol in #7 but if I put it on its own on a t-shirt or something it's a bit pretty and too symmetrical.. I quite like your Wireless Network logo as it is more organic and random on the inside and has a softer outer edge. So a white version of the symbol created by the 'i's above (when 'inspire' is placed above 'tribe') in a coloured boundary like the network symbol might work... It could be a shape or just a more organic boundary....
I hope all this detail helps and doesn't confuse!! Keep up the great work. Thanks, Nikk
Hi Raspy. Thanks for your work - you were a definite Top 5 entry. I too like the design - mixed reaction from others. can I trouble you to try the following. And, perhaps making the design a little more random. Almost a hand drawn feel rather than so perfect. I like the concept as is, it just feels a bit like a perfect flower - I would love to see something a bit more organic. See how you go. I am trying to cull double ups that are not hitting the mark at all until the final designs are chosen so please don't worry if I've culled your other drawings. Thanks again. Nikk
THANKS. i quite like both of them. Is it possible to make the same symbols look like they were done with a japanese calligraphy brush- so they are more natural. I'm not sure if this will or not but I like the idea of the symbol looking a little more natural... just a thought. THANKS, Nikk
Thanks Raspy. #95 is my preference from the last 2. It's pretty good but it's lost the 'celebrating people' feel... And the tail in the centre could be more refined. Try googling "japanese calligraphy" and you will see how some of the letters have a fine point, and thicker bit and then a fine point again. You are the clear top runner for me and my friends at this stage so thanks for your efforts. Nikk
I got a message from another designer in your contest telling me to withdrawal #103 and 104 because the figures look to similar. If I do not I run the risk of being taken to LogoCourt, and if I lose I will get booted completely from the contest. I don't know if you are going to choose my design as the winner so it's in my best interest to withdrawal those two entries. My apologies.