Entry #50: I like the direction this is going. I am undecided between the purple and blue for now, but really like the changes. The Text feels a bit like it is shouting to me, I would like to soften it some. I like the use of lower case for inside. I am really drawn to the simplicity of this and an elegance that is starting to come in it. Thanks for working on it for me.
Entry #55: I like the purple color better. It is the color that I was originally drawn too. I feel like this could move in a direction that represents the identity I want in the world, but it is not there. Please read my note on the main discussion about calligraphy as a metaphor for what I want to represent. The logos are getting busy looking to me and like they are tryin to hard. What would you subtract out with out looking the meaning? How could this be softer and more elegant? The font is shouting at me and that is not what I want.
I think that where it wants to be for me is somewhere between 69 and 55. I like how the out in 55 is balances the figure of the "i" but it is just too strong. In 69 the font is just a bit too curly and soft. I would like to see it bolder and with the out in color. I like that the out is the same font and case in 69. It keeps it as one word in a sense. Can I see a submission moving towards keeping the font and upper and lower case in 55 the same with Out in color and maybe in italics. Keep the slogan. I like that in the logo and miss it in 69. This logo keeps staying in my likeing because it has potential for me. Thanks for working so hard on it.
I greatly appreciate your work. So you are going to think I am crazy but I like pieces of your submission:
I like the figure in 120 very much I don't like the starish look above the "I" in inside in 120 I liked when the figure formed the "i" in inside as in 50 and 32 I like the "inside" font on 120 I'd like to keep the slogan in the image. I am not sure the grey background square in 120 does much - especially if you make the figure part of the word insidel
You are doing a lot of work on this and It is getting somewhere. Thank you