Lovely logo! I especially like the beautiful outline of the eye. Just a few notes however. Could you make the words of the 'slogan' at the bottom in lower case. Also the image within the eye itself - it doesn't really say to me 'we test kids eyes' so maybe you could change that. Thanks for your work do far!
Thank you for changing the lettering in the slogan to lower case. Looks really good! Only thing is I still can't tell the image in the centre is a child? Maybe you could put a silhouette of a child reading in the centre? Great effort. Thanks heaps!
Just something I thought of - could you change the 'and' to an '&' to make the slogan take less room so you can make the font a little larger. It's a bit small to read easily as it is now. Thanks !!!
Hi, thanks for making those changes. I think the it is easier to read now. I noticed that you made the eye picture smaller. Could you make it at least the original size you made the other ones? Maybe even slightly larger would look nicer I think. It doesn't stand out enough at the smaller size. Looks great! Thanks!
Love the changes you made! I like how the figure looks more like a child now and is reaching towards the light and the book - very nice :) And yes, this size is much better. Love this design! Just need to ask the family what they think. I'll let you know if I think of anything else. Thanks so much for all your hard work :)!
Hi After discussions with my family, they came to the conclusion that your design had the nicest shape eyes :) however many of them were confused about what it happening inside they don't think the sun/yellow light/star should be there. Maybe just have the book there instead? Anything else you can think of to improve the message of the central image. Everyone loves everything else about it. Thanks!
okay here are new entries (for now) only the book on #68 & with color variation on #69 I try to figure something out about the message on the central image
Great ideas! My husband likes the idea of letters. He suggested maybe make the child reach for a letter chart as opposed to a book with tumbling letters to see how that looks? Thanks for thinking of some new ideas :) Regarding the colour. I quite like the colour you originally chose so that's why I haven't asked you to change it, however if you want to do one in Pantone pms814, that is the colour I have requested from the other designers after I was unsure about the tones they chose. Thank you!