I guess you might be able to have some gray tones. I think most design software has a conversion feature that transforms the design to black and white.
No color in the logo - all just black and white. My guess is that we might have to drop the shadow in instances where it is used this way, but I am not sure.
We would love to see what the "IF" symbol would look like on the right side of the words and stacked above the words. This will help us as we are thinking through the use on our future digital and media properties. Thanks and thanks for all your great work getting the design to this point. It looks great for our brand purposes
Another good option. I would still like to see it as I described in 690. Half arrow head that impacts the graphic. On the lower horizontal edge of the top bar of the F. It will look like a small triangle cut out of just the middle of the top bar of the F. I would also like a little more space separating the word financial from the tag line better decisions.
The text of your entry is a little difficult to read compared to others. We definitely want to words better decisions to be in a bigger font size and less spread out.
That is one option. Another one I was considering was to have the arrow only on the top horizontal bar of the F. Place it so that it is in line with the vertical right edge of the middle horizontal bar of the F. Also need to see the text changes.
I am moving yours back into first. I need the words better decisions in a slightly bigger font. Can you also compact all of the words of the logo. They are spread out just a little too far. Also - please include the negative space arrow as discussed.
I consulted with the client and confirmed he provided specific direction to the other designer to create the arrow concept and guided him very much. Please consider his request as valid. Thanks.
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Before I apologize, I did not develop the concept of the negtife triangle like other designers did. Because in the blind phase I did not have such a concept.
If I develop their concept, I violate the code of ethics
if possible for more details you can contact the admin
I don't like the arrows in 330. I want you do put a white sloping triangle in the top horizontal line of the F. This was my design idea - not a designer in the contest.
You had negative space arrow in 331 and in 332. It was our demand of designers not something that one of them created. If you can't put in the negative space arrow I will have to choose a different winner because it is one of our company design elements. Send me comment back if you are able to make the changes and I will move your design back into first.
Odds on favorite to be the winner. Just a few more tweaks we want to see. The word financial not in bold. Per the comments for 672 - we want to see if we can get a slight negative space arrow in the letter F.
There is something that I want to try. Can you put a little white hitch (maybe triangle shape) in the top bar of the F that would better emphasize a negative space arrow running between the two horizontal pieces of the F. I specifically asked for other designers to do this, so it is not their design element.
A little more guidance. Please make the i green. Also, increase the size of the graphic just a little bit. We would also like to see the tag line in the logo "Better Decisions"
I like the IF shape better in this one - it is easier to see. Colors are a little too subdued. In this one and 491 can you show us with the i as one color and the f as another color. Green for one letter, blue for the other. We like the shading better in this design (609). The shadow looks like it is two people talking - which is becoming an important design element.
I left you a comment on a different design, but I think I told you the wrong number. We are starting to like this one more. can you remove the shark tooth from the graphic and change the font to match #333?
Can you add back the dot? Also - is there a way to add an arrow like shape to the end of the other two lines (The green and larger blue) so that the have a similar shape at the end to the smaller blue
I like how the "i" in the graphic has a subtle arrow to its shape. I would like to see the subtle arrow on the other two ribbons (blue and green) that flow from the bottom and form the "f" Drop the shark tooth shaped green part that kind of gives the graphic a 3D effect. Still debating but we might want all of the ribbons to be blue in color.
Please come back - we accidentally moved this to the wrong place in the contest. I think the graphic has real promise. It would need another "swoop" coming from the bottom to be the letter i on the left of the letter f. It could represent two different outcomes from a decision point. A promising logo with a little more development.
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Thank you for the message you sent.
It was very helpful and immediately sent a request from the contest holder
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I consulted with the client and confirmed he provided specific direction to the other designer to create the arrow concept and guided him very much. Please consider his request as valid. Thanks.
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Before I apologize, I did not develop the concept of the negtife triangle like other designers did. Because in the blind phase I did not have such a concept.
If I develop their concept, I violate the code of ethics
if possible for more details you can contact the admin
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might be able to add arrows like model # 330
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I did not come in the blind phase with a negative triangle
and there are other designers with the concept
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