In-BodyLogo Design Contest

Hi Jessica

So far entry two is my favourite. Dynamic, shows how information "i" is in-bodied in the body (B) and the circle around the B for me symbolizes the process of integration. My only concern is the positioning statement - do you think the way it is will print clearly on business card and template? And do you think the pink print for positioning statement will print well?
I also really like entry 1

Just interested. Thanks

Hi Jessica

So far your icon is still my favourite.(entry 2)

May I ask for some amends?

With # 2, may I please see:
no movement on the "y" (although I think concept clever, but doesn't resonate with me)
Then instead of having the positioning statements next to each other, could it be aligned under in-body but in two lines? And May I see what the positioning statements look like in black?

then one other version is as above but to move the icon to sit above the word in-body?

Let me know - thanks

I also wanted to know if we could try a different font for the positioning statements?

sorry - last thing :-)

may I also see the font in caps to see how it compares?

Hello TarynKate
Thanks for your feedback,
its updated now!

Best Regards
jesicastudio

awesome thanks - one last favour for now :-)

Can you try exactly like you have it - but with the positioning on two lines - still feel its a bit too much on one line (although it looks balanced to the eye, I am battling to read it clearly)
thanks

Hi there

May I please see it with the icon exactly as is, but in a different font? I like the font of the icon.
And May I please see the positioning on two lines - still feel its a bit too much on one line

And I am not sure what the font is called - but if we can try a font that "feels as if" each letter of the font would fit into a block/square? Just feel the current font might be too "fat" and I would like font that looks like there is a bit more space around it ;-)

would just like to play with options a bit :-) and please may I see it in black and white

thanks

Hi Jessica

If you can please have a look at my top 5 choices in terms of how they have done the positioning statements I would appreciate a revision with same Icon, just different font and spacing of tag lines.

thanks

and if you can refer to comments made on 6 July re the font of the slogan please

thanks

Hi Jessica

Please can you get back to me as soon as possible as the contest closes in a day and a half.

thanks

Hello Taryn

Im so sorry, yesterday i'm totaly offline, because im on traveling, i made some update with the pure Black and white version. anyway, i dont understand about "two lines". let me know

Thankyou

Hi there

No problem.

Thank you for the submission.

Ok - so I LOVE the icon - the I in the B and in the circle.

But the word "IN-BODY" _ I am not crazy about the font - so I would like to see some other versions of different fonts please (with same icon) but different font for "IN-BODY" (and try some in Caps, ie: IN-BODY, and some not, so In-Body)

The Positioning - "Live purposefully and Lead passionately. The best font you have so far is #32, #33 and #91. But I feel it still looks too small and squashed and difficult to read.

Maybe try the positioning on two lines - still feel its a bit too much on one line, so for example,

IN-BODY
live purposefully
lead passionately

And I am not sure what the font I want is called (some of the other designers used it - none of my top 5 have the font for the positioning right for me)

but if we can try a font that "feels as if" each letter of the font would fit into a block/square?
I would like font that looks like there is a bit more space around it ;-)

thank you

check it!

thanks

great - perfect - thanks!

will sleep on it this evening :-)

chat tomorrow (it is 10 pm where I am)

#99 with the icon above? (just to see if it works)

thanks

Check it!
and have a nice sleep :)

thanks

Hi there

last time :-)

please can you look at other top 5 and how they have done 2 lines

and see if you can do something similar

as currently the 2 lines font looks bold and heavy - but maybe more space around letters?

Hello,
here is some update #126 #129 #130

Thanks

Hi there

#130 my favourite so far

but can I see pink and black font colour like u have on #106

is there a way you can "soften" font?

just want to see what it looks like.

I like the current spacing but want to know how it will look softer - so maybe the In-Body font more similar to the "B" font used in icon?

or another clear but softer font?

thanks

Check #134 and #135

Thanks

my last update at
#146 #147 #148 #149 #150

Thanks

Hi thanks

still happy with initial icon

any other potential options with In-body font?

if this is last option that is fine - but would like to see some different font just for the word in-body.

thanks

check it

Thanks

sorry!

i see now u did give me options of different fonts in the green :-) so do not worry about more options for fonts now

OK, if you need any help, just let me know