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I am trying to add elements that maybe haven't been used in this medical field. Not sure that is always achieved but I am trying to create something minimal and unique that can be used in multiple applications as well as be recognizable for you.
Dear Tere, We do appreciate your work! Thats both simplistic and beautiful. Especially #122! Could you please change the colors to blue variations and fonts a bit fancier/distant (Kabel Bk) or etc..we do like it! please do not withdraw anything! Great you joined cheers y
Thank you I will work on that this evening for you.
on #120 and $122
I don't think I have Kabel blk font but will check what is comparable if I don't. I will try some blue variants but is there any specific blues that you prefer? Azure? Cobalt? some with a little turquoise or no turquoise? with both dark and light hues?
Here are some variations based on what I think I'm understanding
I used blue hue %s in CMYK
To stay in balance with the lines on the illustration I used regular and bold fonts. I don't have Kabel but the ones I use the character development is the same especially on the 'e' and the 'm'
Hi Tere, thanks for the variations :) there is just one thing, can we make the face features less stylish? To some, it looks like Egyptian or its even animal like.. We liked the idea a lot just the look.. As for the color, definitely azure not cobalt, maybe turquoise..
we dont want a fat logo. How about if we put the face/nose on the left side of the name? say, like in the case of #120 or #123 but the (less stylish face 143, 122) face on the left..
#182 this one I used only the nose in the logo... it seems that it is important to have an additional line to distiguish that you only want rhinoplasty surgeries since some of the graphics stylized or more realistic can be illustrations that are not quickly recognizable by themselves.
#184 Another approach The background element isn't necessarily part of the overall design but can be. It can also represent a solid very light tone of turquoise
#188 This can be either with the baseline or just the type This one attract both men and women neither feminine or masculine may be seen as simple and refined
I realized I never gave you the designs in a 'wide' layout as you asked on the one you have in 2nd place of mine...to make up for entries that I had to remove I have added almost 10 more entries to show you different fonts and color combinations...I just want you to know that any combination if you can see the possibilities in these may be rearranged to however you like, including the last entry of mine can be with or without the rectangle box. The colors may be combined or with gray tones as well.
Hi Tere, i was afraid I cannot contact you anymore.. Thanks for the message. Well, I found you, we like the rectangular box, the edges can be extended to make it moving, Or, the nose can have a different background... but we want to have a face for sure... Second thing, the face is quite masculine we want the letters feminine, BUT NOT ITALIC or handwritten like.. I print company stuff in Kabel Bk which is similar to Tahoma, could you please have a look at Kabel Bk font, thin ?
Now its time to try varieties both fonts and colors. Placing and face is more or less fixed. Thank you very much Tere we are waiting to hear from you :)
as for #182 is a very nice example for us to see our logo as a header or footer. Could you try some more that we can place the logo with full address or full name of our clinic, which is Ilker Manavbasi Estetik Cerrahi Klinigi.. If you are not allowed to try this new variation you could leave a space for us in your design.. Thanks
#225 If I am understanding you correctly...here is one with a more feminine profile of the face with the Kabel font. I will continue to add more according to your notes.
#228 I refined the lines on the nose just a little The descending line on the 'p' doesn't overlap the line with the Kabel font in the place of where I typed a subline 'Asthetic Rhinoplasty Surgery' you could leave that subline or use that space for your address and it will be easy enough for you to add this after the contest ends just post the address in the comments here and I'll add the address for you to see it in position before the contest ends. I think that is okay...if not, I can add your address in email zip files after the contest ends and you approve current file.
The same can be applied to #227 and #226
You typed in these comments that you would use this on the top 'o'...but the rest of the type is missing??
I will check back in the morning for any updates and to work if there is anything you want to add to these. Good Evening...our time here it is midnight
I am here all day today,...we have heavy thunderstorms coming through today... since I'm out in the country that usually means the lights go out sometimes for several hours. So if you don't hear from me, know I will get back on as soon as I am able.
.....If the storm doesn't knock the lights out I will check from time to time and working on computer all day...you'll be able to see if I'm still on by going to my portfolio it will say logged in 'now'
Hi Tere, I am as well confused about the missing part in my message, never mind :)
well kabel with lower case doesnot look stylish and among upper cases, # 211 looks still better than Kabel. Thanx for trying it out.
Can you try some more upper case variations, i guess we are for upper cases.. its easier to read and it looks more elite.
One more thing, we would like to have (lets say our best example #211) our logo with inverted colors, background blues (dark, azure etc..or deep green or turquoise and letter in white.. Thats how we place it in our web site, transparent version goes for printing.
As for the face, some finds it too masculine, therefore I asked for feminine letters before. If we are out of choice in fonts ( i hope not), one can consider less masculine face variations while keeping the #211's letter in their place. We wanna have a balance of male and female touch..If you have new ideas for the face -slightly different-, we are ready to see. Since some told me it looks more like an architectural company. Still, we want it in this direction, I hope I am clear if not please ask me back. I hope you survived the thunderstorms, we survived an earthquake here today..:-)
Hello, did you notice the slight change on #226 I made the face more feminine...do you want to see more changes.. The type I was referring to is "we intend to use our logo on the top o "....? if you think what is missing is important to the layout let me know.
I am looking for other fonts and will send some in all caps as you suggested, as well as dark background for your website. I will add some feminine fonts...do you like any of the scripts I used.
I used the box around the face profile to depict balance and symmetry but I could put the profile in a circle and oval or semi-circle
I will check back to see if you have any additional comments shortly but will start on the reverse and look for other fonts.
Thank you....the storms came through quickly and our lights stayed on...we got much needed rain I am thankful you are okay from the earthquake.
Here are some #229 #230 #231 #232with a feminine script. I had to increase the lines about .25 to adjust for the dark background.
Most san serif fonts are not very different ..the other selections would be serif fonts such as Trajan or Times or other scripts either fonts or try to create an original handscript.
#233 This is the one that is a more feminine profile
either one of these profiles I can add for you.
Also, I needed to omit some of my entries since they are all posted in my portfolio...I was careful to consider elements that you are still looking at.
Hi Tere, sorry we were very busy yesterday. Could you please try dark background for #227 as well, and #231 can be even darker. Some variations of dark blue? Thanks! y
I know there is about an 7 hour difference is our time schedules. I will work on these before I leave. I have a class this afternoon and will be back about 6pm my time to check on your response.
Let me know if the lines are holding up on these colors...I may need to add % to the thickness of the lines...sometimes background colors in the blue hues causes a visual blur
Dear Tere, We made a break to sleep over the ideas :)) Now we are back and strangely we realized that #214 and # 213 are very beautiful. We always considered blue / green BUT this gray approach looks very alluring! THNX!!
Here is our request:
1. Please make some variations for #213, #214. First of all please switch the colors and let us see it on the gray /dark gray even on the black background. The font is nice you can try thin / thick variations. We find the font very stylish :)
2. Regarding our all time favorite, #227, could you please try a bit thicker font? It looks too thin somehow.
3. Again, #227, the background colors, can you go for even deeper blues, deep navy blue??
4. How can we see the application on a business card or as a header? Do you remember I have written what actually imep stands for, and we need to write it somewhere near the logo (on the top of the logo, bottom of it, one line, 2 lines on the right??) not always but on some of our papers we need to print the whole name, could you propose something?
Here are these for you in both the blue and turquoise hues.
#238 #239 #240 #241
I will check back later and in the morning...but so you know I will be out all day tomorrow as I teach art classes and will return this time tomorrow and check for your response.
Hi Tere, Iguess you didnot see my previous comment which was:
Dear Tere, We made a break to sleep over the ideas :)) Now we are back and strangely we realized that #214 and # 213 are very beautiful. We always considered blue / green BUT this gray approach looks very alluring! THNX!!
Here is our request:
1. Please make some variations for #213, #214. First of all please flap the colors and let us see it on the gray /dark gray even on the black background. The font is nice you can try thin / thick variations. We find the font very stylish :)
2. Regarding our all time favorite, #227, could you please try a bit thicker font? It looks too thin somehow.
3. Again, #227, the background colors, can you go for even deeper blues, deep navy blue??
4. How can we see the application on a business card or as a header? Do you remember I have written what actually imep stands for, and we need to write it somewhere near the logo (on the top of the logo, bottom of it, one line, 2 lines on the right??) not always but on some of our papers we need to print the whole name, could you propose something?
Here are the transposed color and navy version, I've extended the line as a previous entry to show you that your address can go across underneath this nicely.
Since I extended the thickness of the font I needed to extend the thickness of the logo itself to keep balance
Once you decided the primary entry for the contest and it is 'Complete' and you approve my entry will be uploaded into your LT account we will be able to send emails and all the variations of your logo I will send to you in a zip file. We can continue with any additional needs on the others as you know what you need but primarily I will send you all the formats for printing and website work.
I need to remove some of the entries as they all show in my portfolio, so if you would mark the ones you definitely don't want I can remove those this evening.
Just a reminder I will be out all day today with my art classes and need to leave now and will be back my time about 7pm CST
you can easily delete #122, 182, 228, 217, 216, 215, 188, 187 and 183.
We are very enthusiastic about #213 and #214 and cant wait to see them on dark backgrounds :-) I guess we ll pick one of the gray ones and not from blue/green ones in the end.. Thanks for bringing this difference!
Even if you pick the gray or black all the color variations will be emailed to you in a zip file to use if ever needed after the contest is complete and the files in your account that you selected are approved.
I appeciate that and will send you these on black and gray.
I think these are correct?..there are so many possibilities and variables.
I am here, although it is probably about 3am there??
With the exact design you like the best as far as the illustration we could finish any other color details after the contest if you still need to see other variations if that helps.
Hi tere, thnx! Could you please just fill the face in #248 and not the right side of the rectangle? we believe in small printing the details would disappear.
Hi, I mean for instance as for #247, we just wanna see the face filled with white or gray. the half of the rectangle in this case is left black. Same thing for the opposite, #242 just the face is black and the other half of the rectangle is transparent. Could I make myself clear?
When you apply filling to the whole rectangle we r afraid of loosing the details ( in this case the profile face line).
I am looking forward to hearing from you ! have a nice day y
As far as the lines holding up on small printing as on a business card you probably won't be ordering a full bleed printing of black background I assume so with the lines in positive the lines that I submit on these vector drawings will be clean as you see them whether a business card or a billboard. If you prefer the other designs previously submitted you don't need to worry about the quality of printing only the quality 'of the printer' If it helps on the final file I will offset the line path by about .2 on all lines and font to balance to ensure that you don't have any problems. All other variations can be taken care of through email, which right now we cannot communicate outside of here because of our rules of promotion. Have a restful evening Tere
hi tere! there is just one more request from our side : as for #249 could you please apply the same logic to this one as well? filling just the face? btw, we are almost set :) we would like to use #253, #247 or #242 for the website, #213 for A4 documents and new version (referring my request above) of #249 or #250 for our business cards.
I am very curious about this printing stuff which i have no idea about, thanks for your concern, we ll see :)
How do we proceed now? Can we get all (vector drawings) of those I listed above? are you allowed to send just one?
I do printing consulting and can guide your through everything as you add to your printing.
When the time comes you will need to let me know specifically what format the printer you are using is needing. My experience is depending on the professional printer they ask for different formats. You will only be able to pick one of these for the LT contest to complete but after you approve that file when I upload it in the two formats required I will be able to send you a zip file for other formats via email. We can discuss any additional needs you may have and all necessary file details at that time.
LT requirement is that you will need to also pick a different designer for the first 3 ranks before you can 'Complete' the contest
Here are these.... I think the font is 'caviar dreams' I need to go back in the files from the beginning to double check though...I've already 'outlined' the font and when we do that the 'name' isn't retrievable but will let you know.