Many thanks for your designs, the idea with bars is interesting. Outlined pictures in bars in #9 are cool, but we prefer the font from #11, or maybe another font. Also, can you please try to post a variation with a different picture in the brown bar? The meaning of apple and bottle is clear at first sight, but I am not sure what the third thing is :)
Hi Thank you for feedback :) The picture on the brown bar was supposed to be a cereal box... - I guess it is not very clear :) Entry #21 with font from #11 and preserve can, entry #22 with milk carton, different font, also made the color gradient more "web 2" Entry #23 - Another idea... Please let me know if there is anything else you'd like me to try :)
We like #22 the most. Could you please try one more with some heavier font? Regarding the pictures - we finally think they're better filled with white like in #11, its more visible when they're smaller. We also like the cereal box in #11 more than the can, just looks more cool. We had a quite long discussion about what the third picture could be, but still havent found anything that would fit and still be clear to distinguish at this small size.
After a consultation with colleague, we also find #10 interesting. But there is an issue with the proportions - it's too high, we need to use it on smartphone displays and it would consume highly-valued space.
We also like the idea with magnifying glass, thats what our apps does, allows to look closer at the food. We're not quite sure about the intersecting the two Os though. Maybe it reminds olympic circles too much.
Hi Jiri, Here are the new versions: #30 - Heavier font, pictures filled in white, #31 - Same, only with pickle jar :), #32 slightly thicker bars, milk, another font. #33 with pictures on top of bars. Also tried to make the magnifying glass concept less "olympic" :) #34,#35 And last #36 a horizontal version for #10 please let me know if there is anything else you'd like to see
Thanks for new variations, #31 is fine, maybe with enlarging the images in bars a bit like in #56. I would also change the brown bar to red. The third picture is now better than the can, but we're still thinking about it, maybe some sausage or salami?
Also #43 still looks interesting, but we are not sure of the colours. I like the red, can you try some other color of the magnifying glass instead of this gray?
Hi Jiri, Thanks for feedback :) Here are the revisions: #78,#79,#80 -Color variations for magnifying glass #81 - Red bar instead of brown, bigger icons #82 - Salami #83,#84 - Sausages, also reflection underneath... #85,#86 - fish or chocolate bar :) Please let me know if there is anything you'd like me to try
Please also move the pictures in bars a few pixels up like in #83, #84.
We were also talking about the font - would it be possible to have the beginning "il" and ending "o" a bit lighter and the "food" bold as it is now? Also the "d" letter is maybe too high, could it be the same height like "l" and "f"?
Regarding #43 - could you please make the same modification with bold/normal font like in the previous comment for us? About the glass - maybe it would look better outlined, e.g. dark gray or something like that.
Also we still like #10, but we prefer the font from #81 and maybe also bold/normal combination.
Hi, after a few days of thinking we choose #116 as the best design. The bars and pictures are fine. However, we are still considering small modifications:
1) Could you try to change the orange color more into yellow? 2) We are still not sure about the gray color of the letters. Maybe it would also be cool to have the word "food" emphasized by a slightly different color than the other letters. 3) Please make a little space between the bars and product name. 4) Please also post one with reflection like in #39.
Hi, Here are the updates :) #130 - Same letter color as before, yellow bar, reflection #131,#132,#133 - one color variations #134,#135,#136 - two color variations Please let me know if you want to see any other colors/combinations :)