#9 is great. nice font. maybe the blue is too dark. we need something vibrant and fresh. create use of shading in logo. perhaps try and add in some cultural aspects as mentioned in the brief. #10 is nice too. great colors and shading but please remove the smile. the sun/rainbow thing in the back can maybe be replaced with a cultural geometric symbol. play around with the different aspects of each logo i liked and see if you can combine them for example, the font in #9 is excellent.
overall excellent work and creative attempt to incorporate our brief. this is good stuff. #14, #15, #18 are all really nice but i want to marry the three. the words iblog arabia with the geometrical logo in #15 and #18 give a very corporate look as if it were for a corporation. however the colors and font are striking which is the best part. i like #14 the best because it incorporates the geometrical design within the text clouds giving it a cultural blog feel. if the colors of the design the clouds can be as striking and diverse as #15 and #18 along with the font colors of #15 that would be great. we are shooting for a trendy, pop culture, internet blogging feel that gives a personal vibe. as if to empower our users. also, when merging the ideas with #14, please scale down the size of the clouds by about 30% or however much is required for it look good. the words have to appear slight bigger than the clouds themselves. so in conclusion, keep #14, take the striking colors from #15 and #18 and put them into the clouds, reduce the size of the clouds and change the font color to that of #15.
excellent work. great stuff. sorry for the complex comments. #42 is great, just remove the clouds in it and keep the color. when i said clouds, i meant the square comment boxes you used earlier. i refer to the square comment boxes as clouds. so please remove the clouds in #42 and keep the design, color and text.
entry #40 is also excellent. please change the cloud shape behind the word 'iblog' into a square comment box, keep the same color and design. also please align the text 'arabia' to the same height as the word 'iblog'. Also capitalize the letter 'A' in 'arabia.
the top two designs are the best. some modifications please.
#57 please remove shading from the word 'iblog' and give the words 'iblog' and 'arabia' a shine to give it a 3D effect. do not make the square comment bubble in the background 3D. instead, make the greens in the square comment bubble brighter to match the bright blue, orange and yellow that already exist.
#58 please do the same color changes to the square comment bubbles. then add a shine or some effect to make the square comment bubbles look 3D. create two versions please, one with the square comment bubbles and the words both 3D, and the other with ONLY the square comment bubbles 3D but not the word.
Looking forward to your revisions. i think you're making great progress for yourself.
the colors are better but the green can be slightly darker and more solid. just slightly. it needs to be a bright green not a light green just like the blue and orange and yellow. the blue orange yellow are perfect and the green needs to be as solid and as bright.
#83, the words 'iblog arabia' still look like they have shading on it. is it possible to give the words a 3D look, as if they are floating in front of the square comment bubble? perhaps it would help if the lighter part of the shading was near the edge of the text instead of running through the middle where it is now. also in #83 you made the orange and yellow lighter, please do not change the blue orange and yellow from the previous one because they are perfect, only the green needs to change.
#82, please try and give the square comment bubbles a slight 3D look. an example of this would be the way the comment bubbles in the iphone text msg screen looks: keep the colors, design and everything the same, just make the logo look 3D. keep the orange blue and yellow the same as before like #58, only the green must change to a brighter green. remember not lighter but instead brighter.
#86, i like it. can you keep the 3D bubble look but change the colors of the square comment bubble back to the same as #58? i like the colors in #58 they are solid and bright. just make sure only the GREEN is brighter than #58. but please keep the 3D look it is good.
#87 i want the square comment bubble to look the same as #57 with NO 3D effect with same colors but, ONLY the words 'iblogarabia' should have the 3D effect.
Updated! about shading in "iblog" its too hard, cause we cannot create white shading in white surfaces,so i use other color. anyway, in the future, the web style will changed into "HTML 5" style, with less gradients and with clean looks..
keep the colors and the design inside the cloud the same only change the SHAPE. center the cloud behind the whole word 'iblogarabia' and keep the shadow under the cloud
finally, capitalize the letter A in the word 'arabia' and align it to the same height as the word 'iBlog'
Thank you for your updates. Excellent stuff. Can you make iBlogArabia one word in #105 by moving the words 'iblog' and 'arabia closer together. Then take the cloud and CENTER it behind the word 'iBlogArabia'. Also remove the shading from the word 'iblog' and make it more white. keep 'arabia' black but make sure iBlogArabia is close together as one word just like #58
#105 is great, just move iBlogArabia together into one word, and CENTER the cloud behind the words. Do not change the cloud. Leave everything the same. Just center the cloud behidn the one word 'iblogarabia'.
great! for #110 please change the color of the cloud in #110 to the same as #106. DO NOT change the size, or position. ONLY change the color of the cloud to the same as #106