I like your entry. I like the coulor of it as well. If i pick your entryI may keep the color the same but I would like to see a couple other colors used. Can you try it in a grey and in a tan/peuter please
Hello pigs, Thank you for the interest on my work and I am sending the color revisions for our logo. Please let me know if you want to see background / more color alternatives as well as stationery design concepts.
Can you change the the color of the wing to match the font. Can you try some different fonts for the IBAR and increase the size of outfitters a little. I will be getting this embroydered so I am not sure if the Outfitters part would show up. I don't know how detailed the sewing would be.
Can you try the same logo useing a snow goose and another useing a blue phase snow goose? Thanks!
Hello pigs, Thanks for the comments and your selections. Now I have revised the logos again, the wing is recolored with the type, different fonts are applied (serif & slab serif) and finally the snow goose is drawn with longer neck and wider wings, Please let me know if you have anything in your mind :)
#9 Thats a good start. Can you change the font to the same as #10. To me the wing is to far back on the body of the bird. Can you move the body of the bird back a little and extend the back line of it. If you compare it to you duck drawings the duck is right on but the goose is a little out. After that I would like to change the back ground to a dark color and make the goose white. I would only be useing the goose and font part of it none of the back ground color. Thanks for your work it looks great.
Hello pigs, Thanks for your revisions and here I am attaching the final versions of the logos both in bird versions and backgrounds. I am looking forward to hearing your comments on them.
Clearing is fine. I was wondering if you could add a dash or a bit of feather detail in to the void of the wing on entry #8 to make the wing look a little more like an A . I like it the way it is and I know what the logo says. But would a person looking at it on a hat or shirt think it is IBR? If it's possible can you make the horizontal lines of the B and the R line up with that of which you are going to add to the A . What are your thoughts on this?