Hyper NorthwestLogo Design Contest

Not liking the text on this one either unfortunately - think about the text for the dodge viper car - or something similar to it. Also the crown is worse on this one - we want to keep the logo mark a little more simple - this one looks like it tries too hard?

thank you for rank and feedback.

I think we should focus first on logomark first as main element.
Then after logomark concept is OK we can work with type

We think this has potential - we don't like the font much though - also we think the logo mark needs to be the 1st priority when you look at the whole image - currently it looks like the 2nd most important thing. Does this make sense? Maybe it needs some color or pizzazz?

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Hi ibot, thank you very much for your submission! We really want the logo mark to be a standalone mark - it doesn't have to be our initials, but if it's hidden inside, that's okay too - but this mark just tries too hard to work with the initials that it doesn't look like a standalone mark - if you know what we mean? We would love to see what you could come up with next :-)

HN letter combination

This logo mark doesn't really fit our vision, please look at the comments section where we list some designs that we like? Thank you!