#14 - Adorable face. Feels like you're going for a more playful approach here, which could work. The font is playful, but leans toward masculine is my first impression. Do you think you can find one that lends itself to more sophistication?
I really like how the picture could stand on its own, in a small, Facebook sized ad.
Unique font with green tag line wich brings the touch of nature, hope you like it. I love to listen the sounds that you make when im praticing zen meditation, wich is esential for bow and arrow sport that im into. I would like to hear your work :)
#20 - Definitely more the right track. I can't think of any notes to give you that would place it #1, It's pretty good here. There are 2 major choices I have to decide between so far. Whether to go cute, or not. I'm undecided at the moment.
#21 - Getting favorable reviews here. Some have said maybe the graphic could be smaller or softer. I figure since it's seperate from the text I can resize that to taste on this end, IF I decided I need to.
#21 - Further review feels like this might be a bit on the "busy" side. Maybe a few too may waves. One suggestion was to have fewer waves, but also turn one of the waves (or portion of one of the waves) into someone resting on a the wave below them. That might be tricky - it might start to look like a mattress or waterbed ad which we wouldn't want, so I'd keep that in mind if you decide to try one of those. It's getting harder to give good suggestions!
#33 - I've been trying to figure out how to comment on this one. I guess it looks like he's kicking back & enjoying the sun. Even though my current ranked 2 & 3 have darker backgrounds, I've been preferring the ones that don't define a background. I can't say what "Body style" I'd prefer for the person in the image, but I can say that the leg & feet don't feel right.