Hi dotwoman. I don't think the folded napkin element is the right graphic for this store. It's a bit too formal and makes me think restaurant. Out of the 3 fonts you used I prefer Entry #2. I don't like the blue, but the green is OK. Thank you for your submissions so far.
Thanks for trying with the pineapple. Of the 3 you submitted entry #7 is the best. I like that the font is fun and sassy, but not sure about the colors. Play around with some other colors. Could the pineapple be more fabrege egg and less hawaiian fruit?
Thanks for the new ideas. I'm still not sure about the pineapple. I'd like to leave these up so I can keep looking at them. Please continue to submit any other concepts you have. My favorite font so far is Entry #19. I'm not completely opposed to purple, but don't want too much of it. Appreciate your submissions!
remove the purple-ish square in the background, and make the border around the oval-ish frame thicker, or a double border
I like the colors, but not sure if I like the shades of the colors. Does that even make sense? I'd like to seem them brightened just a bit or a couple other options.
Wonderful job. This has been a favorite of friends I've requested feedback from.
If this helps, I really like the colors another designer did in #68...something getting closer to that would be good (which I realize now is probably the opposite of brighter)
thanks for the feedback! I am so happy you like the concept as I was thrilled with it myself! It's always great when type works as art. I will be happy to work with you until everything is 100% the way you want it!
I think I like the pointed corners. over the rounded corners (like #83) As for colors, I like the color of the chair in #73, but like the background of the frame in #83 I think it still needs a bit more of a border. What would it look like to make "humble" the lighter color and "hostess" the darker color? Thanks for all your work on this. It's serioulsy cute!
thanks for all of your great feedback... I hope you like the new back border, I think that gives it what it needed... let me know whatever your would like to see, I will be happy to submit it.
thought I sent this to you earlier, but I accidentally posted to the general page.
like the new border. Regarding the Humble Hostess colors, I think you had it best the first time. It looks better with Humble being the darker color and Hostess being the lighter color.