HumanNature@WorkLogo Design Contest

Thanks so much for your input. Could you show me: 123 without the star and perhaps with the swirl being modified to show movement toward the right (perhaps communicating. intellect+emotion translating into action/productivity/results)

Can you make the green 17 58 26?

I'll write more. A friend is calling to give me feedback on these.
Thanks!
David

Thanks for your feedback sure ill update with modifications shortly

Duminda

update 1

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update 2

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update 3

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Thanks for the speedy response Duminda. I like how that looks. If you want to try any other ideas, this might be helpful:

I just got off the phone with my former advertising exec friend who suggested In come up with some taglines to give folks more direction, so here are two working title taglines:


“Helping Leaders Unlock the Mystery of Employee Motivation”

“Helping Leaders Inspire the Best in People”

My friend said that with that kind of tagline, #124 works well.


Thanks!
David

Oh, one quick question.. what's the difference between 125 and 127? With my monitor I can't tell.

Thanks,
DAvid

Hi Duminda,

When you have a moment, can you show 127 in a font that's a larger version of the Entry that's currently at Rank 1?

Thanks,
DAvid

HI Duminda,

As you can see, I really like 134. I appreciate that it's clean and refined, yet still has a bit of "edge" to it and conveys action.

Thanks so much!
David

Oh, one other thing... could you show me 134 with the color blue in Entry #131. I'd like to compare.

thanks!
David

and....:-) could you show me the design with a larger version of the font in 113. I love how clean and refined that is.

thanks!
D

sure David ill update you soon

Duminda

HI Duminda,

Just got in and got some more feedback that the tag line was too hard to read, something I was wondering about for my business cards (I guess I can always add that at the bottom) ... so,... could you make 124 the same colors as 134, so I can compare.

Thanks so much,
David

124 the same colors as 134

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134 with the color blue in from#131/ large font tag line

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font from #113

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Hi H2,

Could you show me 148 in a darker grey font on the bottom. I'd like if that makes the tagline more readable on a business card size logo.

Thanks!

David

148 with dark tag like

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148 with dark tag like

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155 with tag like

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148 black tag like

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Thanks so much H2. Definitely makes a difference!

Best regards,
David

your welcome David let me know if you need to see any other modifications

Cheers
H2

Hi H2

Thanks. When you have a moment, can you make 171 with this tag line

Understand Inspire Achieve


Thanks!
David

with tag line Understand Inspire Achieve

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Understand Inspire Achieve with black

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Thanks H2! Could you put Achieve under Work and spread out Understand and Inspire? I'm curious if it would look balanced that way.

Thanks!
David

Hi H2

Thanks, I like it spread out like that. Could you use a more condensed font to give the words more distance between. Also, sorry I forgot to mention with the last request... could you make the light green part of the figure dark like the rest. I'd like to see if that adds or detracts.

Thanks!
David

condensed font

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Thanks H2,

Could you do even more condensed. I'd like the words to be separated enough to create more impact.

Thanks!
D

And...could you also show a version with a gold star that he's reaching toward (and one with a silver star). BTW, 2 colleagues just weighed in saying they love #206.

Thanks,
David

...and yet another thought...can you show him reaching for the moon. That might be too busy, but I'm curious how that would look.

Thanks so much,
David

more condensed

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Hi H2

Thanks for the adjustment, but the words still seem too close together. Can you find a similar font that is more condensed so there's more space.

Thanks,
David

Hi H2

Thanks for all the options here. I really appreciate that. I'm going to keep them unranked, so I can get some real compare and contrast feedback from colleagues.

Thanks,
David

P.S. I really like the shadow look you created. Very appealing.

Thanks,
D

Thanks David let me see the feedback from your colleagues

H2

Hi David
based on the LT rules I can't copy others works,
sorry that I have to remove the entriys with stars and will come up with something new

Regards
H2

Oh, in the meantime, can you put that cool shadow under 206?

Thanks,
D

RE: 209

Is that the same as 206? I can't tell the difference on my monitor.

Thanks,
D

206 with cool shadow

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Fantastic! Thanks.

One last request...given the feedback I'm getting about the old tag line, can you give me #250 but with the old tagline:

Helping Leaders Bring Out The Best in People

Thanks!
David

Thanks so much!

Hi H2,

Sorry for the additional revision, but I didn't realize the tagline I asked for wasn't the the original one I liked as in #172. Could you replace that and put a little extra space between the tagline and the HumanNatureAtWork.com? My ad exec friend noticed that last detail.

Thanks!

David

okay will update you with modifications soon

Duminda

Hi Duminda,

Thanks for the updates. I wasn't sure why the .com was there. Could you please remove that. Otherwise it's a winner. So...for the final version please have it like 279 (I didn't notice a difference with the other two, is there a subtle difference I'm not picking up on?) minus the .com and then 279 with no tag line for business cards.

Thanks!
DAvid

Thanks so much H2 for an awesome logo. I also really appreciate all the work, multiple modifications you put into this!

Best regards,

David