Dear CH. here's my design, I try to using colors of your website, the logo it self show symbol of people connection in circle and medical "+" symbol. Hope you like it. thanks for your feedback.
You took the direction from my previous message really well. These latest three are much stronger. Your top logo is great, I love that it uses multiple colors. It's still a little too abstract. And I like that you took a shot at the Hospital road sign, it's cohesive and memorable.
I'd be curious to see more variations on those two themes. With #27, maybe a little less abstract with the mark. With #26, maybe simpler -- the Hospital sign is usually just a big blue H on a white background with a soft-cornered blue box around it. Doing exactly that would be too close to the actual hospital sign, but I'll let you figure it out, if you're interested.
P.S. We looked at your portfolio. The gym wolves logo and your #2 ranked Homes the Wright Way logos are what I we mean when we say "less abstract". I love both of those. And the connectoncology logo is nice and simple.
Very strong portfolio overall, you have a wide range of styles you can work in.
Because this is intended to appeal to nurses (mostly middle-aged women), I polled about 10 of them. One of your logos, which I had ranked in the top 10, was the clear winner among them. They really preferred it, thought it was soft and feminine.
After hearing from them, I now agree with them about your mark. At first I didn't really get it and thought it was abstract, but every woman I showed it immediately saw three people arranged together in a circle. One person even said, "That one's the hospital, that one's the website, and that one is me." Cool!
But I'm not crazy about the type treatment. I like the softer, rounded font, and the overall look is simple, which is great. So don't lose that simplicity or move to a harder, more angular font. But the problem is that it needs to be more readable. The tagline looks in the way to me. But even without the tagline or with the tagline below the logo, I don't think I'd be able to immediately read the word. Maybe making the H bigger and the difference between the H and the "source" would help?
Anyway, congratulations, your work resonated well with our target audience. Would love to see you fine tune it and try to address the type treatment issues.
Dear CH. Its great to know that my design resonated well with your target audience. I'll try to work on those fine tune. I see that it will left me only about 18 hours till judging mode. but I'll try my best :).
by the way, we are now at judging mode. Is there any other fine tune would you like me to do? any experiment in colors or something? or you already happy with my current design?