We like this design however there are a few changes we would like to see - remove the point (arrow, not sure what it is), have "HR" and "HOUR" in the same colour (purple or red) and the "by the" in the opposite colour (whichever the HR and HOUR isn't). As well please remove the italics from "by the HOUR". Add in "INC." in small letters at the end. Many thanks!
We like the change in letters and colours. Back to the pointy thing that was in your original entry - what was that supposed to represent? Is it a compass or a sun dial? We might want to keep it in but it needs to be more clearly defined if we do. Can you explain what it is and can you put it back in more clearly in #83 and #82 . Thanks!
I used the round swoosh and the point to create an abstract clock that represents time (hour). I've made the point (clock hand) a little more pronunced in these versions. Let me know if you want any more changes . Thanks
Thanks it's more pronounced now...one more change - when we showed it to a couple of people they said it looked like one of the people was wearing a pointy hat. Is there anyway of moving the point so that it isn't positioned directly over a head? We like the colouring in #84 best so you can work with that one.