thank you for joining. We prefer #17 over #16. We like how to symbolized "connection" by literally connecting the letters but look to see what else you can come up with. keeping with either "connecting", "integrating", and or network but the overall concept has to say Professional, Social and Trendy! please continue to participate we look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
I like the quality of your recent submission #19 onward. Not a particular fan of where #18 is going. One of the thoughts we had as a team as you concepts #19 onward highlight is an icon to associate with HPIN. Like the icon for the company blackberry. Keep up the them of an icon, perhaps something more squared?
Entry #58 very crisp and clean. we appreciate the quality of your concepts. we like how you tied in the letter "I" also. Could you submit concepts that are a bit more squared? and perhaps without heads? I know they represent users but could we see similar concepts but abstract.
I have posted a general message that I want designers to consider when thinking about HPIN. Please take a read, we are anxious to see what you come up with.
#110 - we like the colors but do you think we can somehow make it softer. #57 made it softer because it resembled a flower. the majority of users will be female but not by much. this logo is sharp and is a bit to masculine. perhaps even chaining the font #109 - is softer because of the green but we don't know if we want to use the green. #105 - we like where your going with this. some sort of mosaic pattern. keeps inline with the integration concept and the windowing theme of the site itself. we also like the flare on the "i" that ties in the icon.
overall I really want to thank you for your continued effort. we getting close, keep up the effort and keep the creativity turning. we still aren't set on one concept. we had a meeting tonight to discuss and concluded that we should stick with concepts that suggest "integration" and/or "network" of many different health professionals. so "many" squares or people (as you already illustrated)
#116 - not a fan of the medical plus "+" sign. #115 - mmm... could you somehow condense everything into a square? #113 - color pallet is better than #110 but its too flowery.
I just had to point out that the quality of your work has be noticed and we do appreciate the continued effort. we love many of your concepts. We like how you have softened #126 and really like #127 as well.
#101, #105, #129 - would like to what sort of variations you can come up with on these concepts.
Green - the "dash" above the letter "I" in #120 the bottom edge is very stright could we curve to resemble the same shape as the people. we do not want the same full person "check" just a swoosh or dash that follows the same curve. we like how it ties together. also the colour of HPIN text, more of a blue than purple. Again your work is very crip and clean.
#105 - we were also thinking about the squares, we liek this concept as well. could you put these in our colours and work though a couple concepts or variations of this idea for us??
thanks but with the dash over the letter "I" we dont want a check the original had three points (triangle) keep it to three points but curve the side to follow the same sort of shape as the person. Also keep it over lapping the "I" not sitting above or ontop
also think about the other concept I mentioned. #105
#213. tile is good but that icon does not work in that tile. Maybe with text or something else like from your work in blue square storage.
#215. we really like. since it is squared (straight lines) no curve on the triangle. Use the triangle in #105 on top of the "I". Again we like the squares, but you are also missing the contrasts as different layers overlap. Spaces that overlap two colors should be slightly lighter than squares that overlap three colors. Just as you did in #105. either way continue you playing around with this concept.
#212 look perfect with the tweak to the triangle/dash