Hope Reins of RaleighLogo Design Contest

Hi Kib. I like this one a lot it is going in the right direction. You don't have to take the photograph literally but I like it. The reason I like this photo so much is it is the essence of what our ministry will be about - the way she is leaning on the horse and he is allowing it shows trust - and I can just sense her letting go, her guard is down, she is able to be herself. Can you define the girl a little more?

Thank you!
Kim

Hi Kib. For #8 and #7 can you work a little on her hair (specifically in #8) it looks a little stringy and her eye shape is a little off. I would also like to see what it looks like if her whole hand where on the horses face maybe moving up his cheek a little kind of like she is petting him. I can't decide between the brown and black or the all black - I still like them both but #8 a bit more.

Thank you!! Very nice work.

Kim

Hi Kib. Did you get my post and previous comments? Would love to see those edits.

Also could you make one that is more gender neutral - we can tell it is a child but it doesn't necessarily have to be a boy or a girl.

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Kim

Kib, wow, I really like what you have done. Love the "wood" ish feel of it because we will be a barn/farm. Can you make her hair a little less "sharp" on the bottom? It looks like sharp edges.

Love it though!

Thanks
Kim

Kib, can you fix the hair on #26 too - I can't decide between which layout I like better. But I really love these.

Thanks
Kim

Kib this is great. Are you up for something new? Maybe incorporating the "reins" aspect. I would love to see some other options. Maybe child holding the reins - children taking the reins of their healing!

I love your work so far and I would love to keep seeing some additional ideas!

thanks
Kim

Kib for #36 it is still my favorite - can you make the child more unisex so it isn't so clearly a girl. I am wondering if a boy would wear this on a shirt?

Thanks
Kim

Hey Kib. I still like your logo as #1 but did you get my request for the changes - can you make it a little more unisex?

thank you
Kim

Hi Kib. You are still my favorite but there is something about the shape of the head now that seems a little off. And the bottom of the head is too "wimsy" the way it flairs out. I hope I am explaining that in a way you can understand.

Thanks
Kim

Also can you check out the new post I made with a different pose the girl hugging the horse. It would look really awesome with the style you have created see http://www.unionhospitalgiftshop.com/onlinestore/store/item_view.asp?estore_itemid=1000027

It is Willow Tree Figurine Quiet Strength. Would love to see you do something with this too.

Thanks
Kim

Kib, you rock! #81 is awesome. You did a great job incorporating that figurine.

I have no comments at the moment. Thank you it is wonderful!

Kim

Kib, I like the horse's shape and how he is turned into the child better in #143 but I like the boy in #135 and how you outlined him versus leaving is more of a silhouette in #143 does that make sense?

Thanks
Kim

Kib, for #135 can you fix his arm? It looks too long or sort of weird. Not sure how to explain?

Thanks
Kim

Kib can you make #150 have somewhat of a face, maybe eyes and a mouth?

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Kim

Hi Kib. I am disappointed that you pulled the other logo. I would have like to explore further how we could make more updates to it - this was consistently everyone's favorite. What can we do to bring back something similar? Do I need to talk to someone at the logo tournament?

Thank you
Kim

Very nice like #172 and how they both now have "eyes". There is still the issue with the arm and I think it is this angle. Can you do two things. Can you make this style into the pose #36 and then take another try with #172 as more of a hug? Try removing her hand and make the horse wrap itself around her? Does that make sense?

Thanks it looks nice.
Kim

Kib can you also do a boy version for #172?

Thanks for continuing to submit during all this drama!! You rock.

Kim

Kib one more comment. Can you stack the logo like in entry#131 where Hope Reins is on top and of Raleigh is on bottom? To emphasize Hope Reins first. I would like to see how that looks.

Thanks!
Kim