Hope Reins of RaleighLogo Design Contest

Hello. I really like the design on #13. I particularly like how you emphasized the word "Hope" in the text. Could you define the horse and girl a little bit more in the picture - meaning emphasize them a little more - give them more depth.

Thank you!
Kim

Hi Kim, thank you for your feedback and your rank! I will work on that! Now! Regards, Fernando.

Hi Kim
I am so happy you like the concept. I wanted to capture the friendly feel that I got from your brief. Adding more depth to the picture, I positioned it in such a way that it 'hugs' the logo. I have made the horse and girl more visually lovable. Thank you so much for the feedback. I will enjoy working with you until you have exactly what you want.

Regards, Fernando.

Hi Kim, now is for boys and girls. Learning the values of life, family, faith, and trust.
Connection between horse and child
Healing and freedom from past - taking the reins of their healing
Comfort and safety

I hope you like it!

Regards, Fernando.

Hi Fernando. Thank you so much for your excitement and your awesome submissions. I am excited to be working with you. I like the new submissions how you incorporated the boy and girl; however, it is a little too cartoonish. I still really like #13 but can you please define a little more the horse and girl - love how you made it a silhouette but just want a little more definition.I like this because it is very simple.

Thank you!
Kim

Fernando, thank you for your latest entry. I like it - still LOVE #13 - can you just define the outline of the girl and horse slightly - don't fill in the picture...just wanting a little more definition. does that make sense. still one of my favorites.

Thank you

Kim

Hi Kim, i hope you like it more at the end...
Tell me if you need some adjustment! Thank you, Fernando.

Fernando these are great. Are you up for something new? Maybe incorporating the "reins" aspect. I would love to see some other options. Maybe child holding the reins - children taking the reins of their healing!

I love your work so far and I would love to keep seeing some additional ideas!

thanks
Kim

Hi Kim
The reins aspect incorporated! I hope you like it! Regards, Fernando. Maybe someday you can change the rank...;)
Regards, Fernando.

Hi Fernando. For #39 I like how you tried to incorporate the reins, but they are a little too "loose". Can you tighten it up like she has them in her hand and it doesn't look like the rein is flying above the head? That would scare the horse. You can check out some pictures of a horse in bridle to see what it would look like.

I am totally open to new ideas too - maybe something different with the reins? Your original without the reins #33 is a top favorite - it is simple and clean. I would love to see something totally different with reins.

Thanks for your hard work - you are awesome!!

Kim

Hey Fernando...have you given up on our contest? I hope not. We still really like #33 it is one of the top still in the running. I am still just wanting to see the girl a little more defined something with the shape of her head seems a little off to me. I just love the overall design though it is so simple and clean.

Thanks
Kim

Kim i will try something new tomorrow. I will upload on Monday! Thank you for your feedback!!!
I never give up! ;)

Regards, Fer

Hi Kim, now you have a clean logo! I hope you like it!

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Hi Kim, here you have new concept riding, with movement, simple and clean! Regards, Fernando. Please rank again! 5th? I want to win.

Fernando, I like #96 - can you make the girl a little older? Maybe taller? And bring the horse's head up a little he is reaching down so low that his neck looks a little odd. I do like this one. Still love your original too and would to rank that back up to the top if we can tweek it just a little. #32 there is something odd about the shape of the girls head if you can make it less round? does that make sense.

#126 is nice but it looks like they are racing...

thanks for continuing to submit - this is fabulous work you are very talented!

Kim

Hi Kim maybe this one!?
Fer

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I love this one!

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#147 is very nice. Can you fix the horses ears - point them forward toward the girl - he looks mad. Maybe lower his head so it seems that he is following her - right now it looks like he is trying to fight her. Also can you change her hair so the pony tail is not pointing out from the top of her head?

Thanks Fernando!
Kim

Update! #148 and #149

new

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Hi Fernando. These are all very nice. Can you take #170 and make the horse's ears point forward towards the girl - the way his ears are pinned back makes him look angry.

And can you take the pony tail off the top of her head and maybe put it lower on her head - it looks like it is sort of sprouting out of her head? Maybe pull it back on the nape of the neck? Same thing for #169. The high pony tail makes the girl look young and we are wanting her to seem a little older maybe 10 or 11 years old.

Thank you
Kim

Hi Kim, thank you for your feedback, now i understand better your comments! I hope you like it!

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