Hey MightyBeaver, thanks a lot for the submission. It's a really great logo.
I like your use of the zombie hand, with the horizon line used as a linebreak between the Hope and Zombies for #4. It's a little too simple though. I'd like to see a more sensational and apocalyptic font - something between a road sign with chipping paint and spray paint on a wall. I'd also like to see a design that uses a little more color - but that could be used as a stencil if needed, if that's possible.
I'll update the briefing since you definitely delivered a strong stencil logo and I'm asking for something a bit different.
Please don't withdraw, as I'd like to see these next to any of your future submissions. Thanks!
Thanks, Kamil! The new font looks great. Very Night Of The Living Dead.
Just some small nit-picks. I like how tight and striking the font of #4 is over #5, it definitely catches the eye more - perhaps its that it's more solid too. Also, on #5 could I see it where the line break to the right of FOR goes all the way to the end of the E in HOPE - like it does on #4?
Did you also notice the cracks in the hand for #5 bleed into the bite mark, making it look much less like what it is and more like a chip in the stencil? Could we somehow re-adjust the crack so the bite mark persists?
I'll be interested in seeing what other ideas you've got.