Honolulu Film FestivalLogo Design Contest

Hello CH,
My idea is to make a Hawaiian Flower by using film roll, this is just a fast sketch so you can see where Im going. any feedback are welcome

Kind Regards

apple.berry

(This comment references Entry #25)

I like it! the flower could be cleaned up a little bit. the film sprocket holes are little hard to discern. also, let's capitalize the f and f in "Film Festival"

Black and White

(This comment references Entry #41)

#77 updated version of #70

on white background

(This comment references Entry #79)

Darker version

(This comment references Entry #80)

feedback are welcome
#99 #100
Thank you

Kind Regards

Hello CH. If you take a look at #77 or any other entry you will see more shape then you do on entry #70
you will see that on the 'highest' part of the flower is flat. on #77 you see more shape and contrast.

Kind Regards

apple.b :)