Garnett,
Can you put the text in #24 in the box like you did for the others? Also, increase the font size of the word "Project". I'd like to see all three words "The Senior Heroes" in the box. I like how this logo is not as vertical as #30. That said, I like the text use in #30 better. Perhaps removing the "to us its personal" from #30 would achieve the same feel.