hobo-broLogo Design Contest

#11 Hi try to get rid of the ribbon look on the top , and in, smaller lettering below HOBO-BRO. add............ San Luis Obispo-CA,,,Also close oth hole in his sack ... it looks like he is caring a ham.... sorry, and Thanks, BYRON also the slogan can go away....I think it is to busy looking ???
Hi great job on #14 but PLease try and loose the lines around the charter, use the same back ground as # 11 thanks BYRON
Thanks I love # 20 Can you add the accent lines you have in # 11 just to see if it makes a differancs or makes it look to busy,,,,,thanks again BYRON 10- 2- 2010

Thanks for the comment,
here are the changes you asked for.
Let me know what you think.
Thanks, Bob.

(This comment references Entry #14)

Please remove the sun burst from the back ground around the figure and make a better looking dog.....thanks BYRON

Hello,
here are the changes you asked for.
Thanks for the comment.
Best regards, Bob.

(This comment references Entry #20)

Could you put a WHITE narrow outline, to make it POP out out of the Black background.... thanks BYRON

Thanks for the comment,
here are the changes you asked for.
Let me know what you think.
Thanks, Bob.

(This comment references Entry #21)