Entry #4 and #5: Thank you for trying again. I truly appreciate it. :)
Unfortunately, the "stick person with no face" is very common in my profession (coaching / HR), so it's not of interest to me. I've just seen it far too many times. Thank you.
Thank you for continuing to submit. Unfortunately, I cannot use the tie because it is too masculine, and my course is designed for both women and men. Thank you.
Entry #5: I have an idea! What if, instead of a tie, you flipped the exclamation mark upside down, and created a bubble letter exclamation mark - that looked like the colors in the tie! And, then, you could put The Ultimate Job Search Course on the left of the tie, instead of on the right. I really like these designs, if we can figure out one w/o a tie! You may have to change the font again to make the bubble letter work with the rest of the letters (they may not work if they are so small), but just an idea. Thank you!
Entry #5 - the exclamation mark doesn't even need to be upside down! You could do a very cool one at the end....if you like! :) Ok, I'm done giving feedback...please forgive my long-windedness. :)